Will You Stay With Me? Poem by Ken Suh

Will You Stay With Me?

Rating: 4.8


I saw a couple walking by
fighting with each other
The noise made some sparrow cry
my heart was painfully bothered

I went to my life, my treasure
my soul boiled like a monster
I looked at her and thought for a measure
then with love, I asked her

Will you stay with me?
you girl, my only one
Can we always be?
please don't go away or run

Will you have me near?
to hold you in my arms
I will try to let you never fear
protect you from all harm

Will you, with me, have a talk?
tell whats on our minds
Together while we have a walk
in you, happiness I find

Will you go through the times?
with me, both happy and sad
Go through all hardships and terrors
that might make us go mad

Will you forgive all?
the sins that I commited
Even when I fail and fall
those things, you all omitted

Will you keep my Heart?
safe and unharmed
Please don't break it apart
my heart that you charmed

She came up to me, held my hand
and started crying.....until
She whispered 6 loving words
'I love you and always will'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eyan Desir 25 January 2009

nice work i voted it a 10

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Eyan Desir 25 January 2009

nice work i voted it a 10

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Katy White 25 January 2009

OMG! ! ! I loved it... I gave it a 10! ! !

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Crystal Torres 05 February 2009

WOW! ! ! ! i loved see if any guy could come up with somethin like this well wow i mean its GREAT and i have no problem giving it a 10 and btw i just love the way u spoke ur feeling through out the whole thing! !

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Sasidharan Vellat Menon 27 January 2009

I can see a caring mind in you. Keep writing. All the best

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Tess Bybee 26 January 2009

This good, and I think it's well thought out. Good job.

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Kayla Martinez 26 January 2009

ken suh. this is a marvelous piece of work you got here. the person that is to receive this is a lucky one. i hope the both of you much happiness.

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Natalie Rosario 26 January 2009

awww so nice love it this is perfect to give to ruth she would love it i know i would she would be crazy not to love this poem

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