Win Poem by Neela Nath Das

Win

Rating: 5.0


I have never tried to win
Anyone's heart and never will try.
The sea which scares me now
Was once land dry.
Nothing is absolute in this world.
Good or bad is relative, I know.
Today, I may appear good
But, bad tomorrow.
I have never trod the way
Which gives me grief.
There's no permanence in love
But it's heart's short trip.
To win or to lose is nothing
But an earthly thought.
All the feuds end by Him
By whom we are brought.

Friday, January 9, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: lifestyle
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lyn Paul 09 January 2015

Neela you have never tried to win..... for I believe you have always known who you are and just what you want. Your wisdom shines. Love these words. Thank You

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Kim Barney 09 January 2015

Wonderfully written. Great job, as usual. A ten from me.

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Rajesh Thankappan 09 January 2015

An excellent metaphysical poem which is also a good food for thought. Life on earth is temporal and so we do not know whether our earthly emotions transcends death.10/10 for this gem of a composition.

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Hans Vr 09 January 2015

I think you have managed to be the real you. A certain level of surrendering and living in the glory of the that big Universal Force. Very nice write

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Amitava Sur 08 July 2015

It's a lovely poem of knowledge and wisdom. Truly, in our mortal and materialistic life 'win or lose' is a perception only since we don't know the real constant behind it.

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Geetha Jayakumar 24 January 2015

Beautiful poem Neela. Very true said in few lines...... I have never tried to win Anyone's heart and never will try. To be frank very true said, we can never win ones heart. To Win or to loose is really ones perception about life. I loved the positivity it conveys. Loved it.

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Sekharan Pookkat 22 January 2015

Etham na mama- Nothing is ours in this world - - good penning

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Chuy Amante 11 January 2015

the love of God is the only eternal love when we offer that we are in love forever it has no needs nor expectations it just is pure it is for all of our brothers and it is appropriate for all situations you have this flame within you you shine Neela! ! ! thank you

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Neela Nath Das 10 January 2015

My friends, thanks a lot for leaving wonderful thoughts for this poem.

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