Winter Rains ~ Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Winter Rains ~

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When winter is on the grass dances to the tunes of dews
and the wind carries a lusty scent all around,
No melody is better than the harvest song.

The sun rays are gentle while, clouds are thick and rich,
The ocean play symphony and radiant spring blooms,
The springtime is a gift from God.

Yellow faces of daffodils sings and dances,
While the occasional rain resounds pit, pat, pit, pat,
mixing memory and desire of mellower season.

No gem or gold can give this pleasure,
When ice is in making the world looks good enough to bite,
the melting world, in mouth gives a true taste of the winter.

Friday, June 25, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: winter,season,rain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Zoyza Da Vinka 25 June 2021

I love this season and the last stanza is extraordinary, Ice world meting on tongue. WOW 5

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Michael Jack 25 June 2021

The springtime is a gift from God. Infact all time is a gift.

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Gordon Walter 25 June 2021

Feast of season. Ice Creammmmmmmmmmmmmmm

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 25 June 2021

Such beautiful imagery! I love this.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 26 June 2021

I hope you got my comment. And Plz do read and comment my newest poem too titled, 'The value of life and oxygen

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Varsha M 30 June 2021

Sirji beautifully portrayed. There is true winters without having a bite of ice cream. I really enjoyed. Beautiful.

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Aarzoo Mehek 30 June 2021

I can feel the poem. Beautifully described. Lovely lovely thought.

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Suzon Albert 27 June 2021

Outstanding poem with free flowing words.

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Anjandev Roy 26 June 2021

Simply superb....

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Anjandev Roy 26 June 2021

No melody is better than the harvest song.

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