I said heart of mine
To go with this air
And get happy sign
In my life to care
It said to me fine
And came with tear
It mistook my line
And did me an unfair
I told it lets refine
And made it my pair
It’s a painful wine
I had with full aware
I drank it with dine
As though it’s a fare
Slowly I felt it’s divine
Then my real prayer
I started to feel shine
In my painful flare
It’s like on cloud nine
My pain is bliss I swear
All worlds joy combine
Is small if I compare
With my hearts decline
In hurry it did a best affair
the wisdom that you find within, is the lord taking away our sins. at times we do not think the way we should, because we are blinded by the lights. but wisdom comes when we stand and fight.
A magnanimous composition my friend... great rhyme scheme with the abab quatrains followed...awesome wisdom and point of views in life! 10+++
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I started to feel shine In my painful flare It’s like on cloud nine My pain is bliss I swear' you know friend.. when i read these lines i always remember the first time you invited me to read one of your poems.... and how much you v moved on.. where as my life is still stagnating.. this is a nice write indeed..10 with love shan