M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 166,555 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Wise Man - On Love - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

This wise man thought
The world is not a place to live
Why not take his beloved
To sky where they would dwell
In peace with stars and moon around
Nobody will bother them
Nobody will disturb them
And they will live in eternal peace
Soul united in space without hindrance
The body was left stagger
The union was really a difficult task
Earth is the only place which has
Both pleasure and joy with trial and turbulence

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Form: Free Verse

Comments about Wise Man - On Love by M. Asim Nehal

  • Mihaela Pirjol (12/8/2015 12:26:00 PM)

    A world of contrasts and paradoxes such as Earth; is a world for the human-soul to evolve. A thoughtful write. (Report) Reply

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  • Liza Sudina (11/18/2015 7:02:00 AM)

    Earth is the only place - for humans on this stage of evolution may be. But Seers say - there are other better and worse worlds. (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (11/16/2015 11:35:00 AM)

    We must take the good with the bad, for we have no choice (Report) Reply

  • Souren Mondal (11/16/2015 9:48:00 AM)

    Yes Asim.. Life and love is not aboit 'escaping' the troubles, but facing them.. A beautiful and wise write.10 :) (Report) Reply

  • (11/16/2015 8:48:00 AM)

    The joy of living on earth is unexplainable.......10 (Report) Reply

  • Rahman Henry (11/16/2015 8:17:00 AM)

    I agreed. Beauty of thought. Wonderful poem... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 16, 2015

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