Wish Poem by oreoluwa sunmonu

Wish

Rating: 3.7


</>all tru the night,
thinking of you,
breeze blowing here and there,
emotions running tru my mind,
thinking of what to do,
there are no answers coming in,
wish i could hold you right in my arm,
wish i could feel your hands running tru my hair,
wish i could feel your gentle touch,
wish i could be right by your side,
wish i could kiss you, feel your soculent lips covering mine,
what else can i wish my 'love'
have a good night rest,
love you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
*BleedingHeart* *Arielle* 16 November 2011

awwwwww that was so sweet it was amazing great job

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Dave Walker 17 November 2011

Like it, a good poem.

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Ebi Robert 18 November 2011

This is a lullaby of love, my friend'

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Hans Vr 19 November 2011

Good Poem, Temmy

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Vijay Sai R 30 May 2012

a melting poem on love...nice to read

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Sajna Kailas 30 May 2012

nice poem. like it.

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Romeo Della Valle 25 March 2012

May your precious wish come true one day! This is your starting point into the Poetry World for you found a perfect Muse! This is a sincere and well penned Love's Confession that clearly exposes your poetic talent and great feelings! WELCOME to the Poetry World! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! I look forward to read some more of your thought provoking writes! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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Ramesh Rai 09 February 2012

xlent wishes. may god fulfill ur all wishes

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Pari Dharawat 19 November 2011

nicely written, good poem

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