Wishing Well Poem by Sandra Feldman

Wishing Well

Rating: 4.7


If I can make you happy,
Why should I make you sad?
If I can look upon the stars,
And wish good things to happen,
Why should I wish for bad?
If I could change war into peace,
I certainly would try,
After so many years have past,
It's time for War to die.

Saturday, October 17, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: peace
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Thou shalt not kill.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 19 October 2015

Dear Poet Sandra, I am immensely pleased to go through this beautiful poem, which is very well composed from the title, through the text, to the Poet's Notes. Well done, dear poet! Wonderful expression!

0 0 Reply
Ratnakar Mandlik 18 October 2015

Wishing for a win-win situation and oozing out positive energy, the verse is great. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success