With Deep Touch Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

With Deep Touch

Rating: 3.3


With deep touch

Who shall say?
Give me way
As poet
To write and keep quiet

I have little heart
That wants to show some art
Not with painting
But with real feelings

Human life is as such very delicate
With almost nothing to guess or indicate
It is assumption
With no solid information

So, it is imagery
Presentation of scenery
With little mixture of sad incidence
And sometimes situation tense

What else do you write?
Arouse the interest and ignite
Report it to people with deep touch
Sometimes it positively reaches

With Deep Touch
Wednesday, October 12, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ratnakar Mandlik 15 October 2016

It is imagery Presentation of scenery With little mixture of sad incidence And sometimes situation tense.. Realistic yet amazing write. Heartiest Congrats on Poem of the Day.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 October 2016

Little heart shows wonderful art. Living in this world every soul inherits this art. We guess and indicate more about such art. Presentation of scenery to presentation of memory everything holds and gives deep touch. Poem is excellent one.10....Congratulations!

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Bharati Nayak 15 October 2016

I have little heart That wants to show some art Not with painting But with real feelings- - - - -Without real feelings a poem can not touch.Of course many times it is difficult to convey real feelings through words.A beautiful poem on the art of writing poem.

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 October 2016

To show them art! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 15 October 2016

Congratulations for being selected for the day...... Nice work with a touch so deep.....

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 October 2016

x welcome Radha Gandhi 12 Oct

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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