With My Thread Of Love Poem by Amitava Sur

With My Thread Of Love

Rating: 4.7


Waiting eagerly with a bouquet of rose
Being so fragrant with radiant hues

With my thread of love I knitted the flowers
Opening the door, standing long hours!

I 'll caress your cheeks with tender rose petals
And wash your feet with morning dews on rose.

Tenderly I'll soak them with an endearing smile
With many more soft petals lying thereby.

Welcoming you over a flower laden aisle
I kept your throne decorated with love.

Do you remember the day we married
Under the chandelier with glittering light?

People were blessing us, showering rose
We two were enjoying being so content!

Why had you been so hurry to exit
And turned your face away in in the mist?

Why have you deserted me so miserably alone
Only to muse on and beg you with tears?

I still await you with all my zests
With a handful of yellow rose of your choice!

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Amitava (8.8.2014) 7-00am
(on our marriage anniversary)

Sunday, August 10, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: Love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem I wrote in memory of my beloved whom I miss every moment. I remember her on our marriage anniversary day.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Sad one....what could have caused the rift or the drift. Beautiful piece. I am going through tough divorce and this seems to be my story too.

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Valsa George 11 August 2014

A very moving memory and enactment of a sacred union! I can gauge the intensity and depth of your feelings on this memorable day..... Let the garland of love you keep ready for her never fade! A lovely poem, Amitava!

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Akhtar Jawad 11 August 2014

A sad and impressive poem touching the heart.

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Geetha Jayakumar 12 August 2014

Heartfelt poem though a sad one, feelings are poured out from painful heart. A lovely poem on memories of beloved!

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Gajanan Mishra 10 August 2014

pure love, it is blessing, thanks,

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Roseann Shawiak 11 April 2015

Amitava, your heart is emptying itself fully into this sorrowful poem, showing us all the very depths of your all-inspiring love for Rakhee. Images of your beautiful memories and feelings will never fade away, because you have captured them all completely and simply within this poem. Thank you for sharing these most intimate thoughts and feelings with us, Amivava. May this poem continually remind you of your love and the heartfelt love all of us around the world feel for you in this loss. Love you, RoseAnn

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 17 August 2014

Do you remember the day we married? Nice. Please recall the pleasant times. Relive those moments. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

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Heather Wilkins 15 August 2014

a beautiful love poem with a sad ending

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Salini Nair 14 August 2014

Why had you been so haste to exit And turned your face away from me? ..........any way she is great...so many great love poems on her side...........nice sir

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Savita Tyagi 13 August 2014

Those memories are precious. Even a day of love as such would make any one feel blessed. Lovely poem.

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