Journey Poems: 451 / 500

...With Smile

Rating: 4.4

yes... i heard
your crispy voice
enough to give beats
to my resting senses

it feels so good
you couldn’t imagine
the joy you have given me
hope you do the same

i wanted to listen more
as i journey to dreams
in my private paradise
where sweet words rise
like steam from newly cook rice
flirting to softness of breeze
i can’t wait to hear again
have a wonderful evening

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Billy Joe Collins 17 November 2008

nicely wrote thanks for sharing

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Ken E Hall 18 March 2010

Very soft and inviting poem for the resting senses to keep our love hearts beating nice one regards

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yes... i heard your crispy voice enough to give beats to my resting senses it feels so good you couldn’t imagine the joy you have given me hope you do the same.lovely poem i can't resisting adding something to it... i liked it.... I am here you are there still i bear continously hear your foot steps it creates some sense m not at all tense it is unique i too seek your company there are not many you are one and only one come to me as only one-- read mine smile.... smile with laughter

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Aziz Alkaabi 15 March 2009

Your style is intriguing yet simple and flowing. I will read more!

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Nimal Dunuhinga 21 January 2009

A very beautiful poem like a flower in tears!

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Mohammed Albalushi 23 December 2008

you cant wait to hear again and i cant waitto read again such lovely poem, good luck

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