Woman. Poem by siddharth singh.

Woman.

Rating: 4.9


Succinct and incisive, he said its over.
Struck by lightning, she fell on her knees.
Delusioned and distressed,
stared at him walking away.
One by one tears rolled down her eyes,
only to vanish into nothingness.
Soaked in despondence she touched her belly
to feel the life in her womb.
Gathered herself to take a shower
untill all her tears dried up.
Promised herself to salvage her pride.
Emboldened her heart festered by love,
transformed it with resolve and courage.
Brought a tiny new life into this world
and sculpted a man, to triumph as a woman.


' copyright 2010 siddharth singh.'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Renganathan 16 March 2010

Written with hearty feel making the reader too feel it...successful choice of words...well done

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what is over..a relationship...you pack this incident finely in a poem

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Pradyumna Jyotir 16 March 2010

I salute this woman......hats off to her......life is too short....let not one incident mar your entire outlook......and hats off to you for portraying a woman of substance.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 16 March 2010

It’s a poem on glory to woman and motherhood… the ultimate culmination… You’ve nicely brought-alive the gloss of woman…thanks… 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Monica Singh 14 March 2010

Simply awesome. I m sure u have captured the heart of all females through ur masterpiece. U have beutifully portrayed emotions of the female. U deserve more than 10+ no doubt.

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Made a revisit to experience the power in a woman's heart, her resolve, her pride in her motherhood. The man who abandoned her becomes worthless trash before her!

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Enjoyed the poem. Nice one.

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Anjali Sinha 11 April 2010

Brought a tiny new life into this world and sculpted a man, to triumph as a woman. wow wow wowwwwwwwwww what a grand finale! ! ! ! ! ! ! --and sculpted a man to triumph as a woman -10 anjali

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Tarun Dutt 04 April 2010

Good poems Mr. Singh, If in case you are interested to publish your poems get in touch with me. Keep it up! !

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Miriam Maia Padua 17 March 2010

the true essence of being a woman.... you've written it beautifully and you have given every woman a tribute of respect and gratefulness and appreciation very significant write... 10+++ Maia

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