siddharth singh.

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Woman. - Poem by siddharth singh.

Succinct and incisive, he said its over.
Struck by lightning, she fell on her knees.
Delusioned and distressed,
stared at him walking away.
One by one tears rolled down her eyes,
only to vanish into nothingness.
Soaked in despondence she touched her belly
to feel the life in her womb.
Gathered herself to take a shower
untill all her tears dried up.
Promised herself to salvage her pride.
Emboldened her heart festered by love,
transformed it with resolve and courage.
Brought a tiny new life into this world
and sculpted a man, to triumph as a woman.


' copyright 2010 siddharth singh.'


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  • Anjali Sinha (4/11/2010 3:07:00 AM)

    Brought a tiny new life into this world
    and sculpted a man, to triumph as a woman.

    wow wow wowwwwwwwwww
    what a grand finale! ! ! ! ! ! !
    --and sculpted a man to triumph as a woman
    -10 anjali
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  • Tarun Dutt (4/4/2010 3:54:00 AM)

    Good poems Mr. Singh, If in case you are interested to publish your poems get in touch with me.
    Keep it up! !
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  • Miriam Maia PaduaMiriam Maia Padua (3/17/2010 12:34:00 PM)

    the true essence of being a woman....
    you've written it beautifully and you have given every woman
    a tribute of respect and gratefulness and appreciation
    very significant write...
    10+++

    Maia
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  • Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (3/16/2010 2:16:00 PM)

    It’s a poem on glory to woman and motherhood… the ultimate culmination…

    You’ve nicely brought-alive the gloss of woman…thanks…
    10++
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
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  • Pradyumna Jyotir (3/16/2010 7:39:00 AM)

    I salute this woman......hats off to her......life is too short....let not one incident mar your entire outlook......and hats off to you for portraying a woman of substance. (Report)Reply

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  • Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (3/16/2010 5:13:00 AM)

    what is over..a relationship...you pack this incident finely in a poem (Report)Reply

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  • Indira RenganathanIndira Renganathan (3/16/2010 3:46:00 AM)

    Written with hearty feel making the reader too feel it...successful choice of words...well done (Report)Reply

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  • Monica Singh (3/14/2010 10:03:00 AM)

    Simply awesome. I m sure u have captured the heart of all females through ur masterpiece. U have beutifully portrayed emotions of the female. U deserve more than 10+ no doubt. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, March 12, 2010

Poem Edited: Sunday, March 14, 2010


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