Preetam Shetty

Woman

Freshness of shower
Fragrance of flower
Music of river
Warmth to prevent shiver
Strength of earth
Essence of birth
Immortality of time
Poetry with a rhyme
Universal shine
Power to refine
Strength to fight
Symbol of might
Taste of affection
World of perfection
Sea of emotion
Meaning of devotion
Feel of serenity
Face of divinity

Art to decoy
Ability to destroy
Venomous skill
Silent kill
Razor’s strap
Unsolvable trap
Ferocious flame
Dangerous game
Motives malign
Addiction of wine
Unsolvable puzzle
Signs of trouble
Anger of lord
Thirst of a sword
Temptation to lure
Poison without a cure
Smirk with a shy
Unholy cry

Ingredients of a composition
Together which we call a “WOMAN”

(This poem is written in a context that if a woman wants she can make but at times she can also break)

Poem Submitted: Thursday, June 3, 2010

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  • Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (7/17/2010 11:07:00 AM)

    Light and Shade on women…well it is good one…but darks have been overturned by the lights… congrats for sharing
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    10/10
    PS In MPL clicked
    n

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  • Dr Tony BrahminDr Tony Brahmin (6/5/2010 10:36:00 AM)

    you keep the rhythm and the rhyming ending of the sentences.. it is really very m
    uch priseworthy. you comment and praise the virtues of women.

    World of perfection
    Sea of emotion
    Meaning of devotion
    Feel of serenity
    Face of divinity.

    Therare poets who are realistic and poets who are not realistic. may experience of life make you a wonderful poet. That is my great wish for you. thank you for sharing.

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  • Hans VrHans Vr (6/4/2010 8:26:00 AM)

    Very well written. Exactly the right choice of words, melodiously joined together.
    I like the two extremes put against each other. You got so many praises of women in this comments section on this poem, called woman. Really a great write.

    In movies we tend to like to second one, but in our house the first. :)

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  • Christina Phan (6/4/2010 5:53:00 AM)

    wow its was wonderul and nothing was wrong with this poem. as along u write with ur heart, its will sound amazing.
    10+++

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  • Gita AshokGita Ashok (6/4/2010 2:17:00 AM)

    Oh my God, I am speechless. You have presented such a great analysis here. What impressed me the most are the lines:

    World of perfection
    Sea of emotion
    Meaning of devotion
    Feel of serenity
    Face of divinity

    and

    Motives malign
    Addiction of wine
    Unsolvable puzzle
    Signs of trouble
    Anger of lord
    Thirst of a sword
    Temptation to lure

    Well done.

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  • ~**Lucky You **~ (6/3/2010 9:23:00 PM)

    this is an amazing poem! ! ! Love it! ! 100000/10! !

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  • Amy (6/3/2010 5:04:00 PM)

    posotive and negative aspects to a woman, well written, a TEN!

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  • Lucia Domingos Fula (6/3/2010 3:28:00 PM)

    this is just beautiful it's perfect i love this i will give +10

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  • Bianca Isabela (6/3/2010 1:36:00 PM)

    Beautifully said! Cheers!

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  • Merna Ibrahim (6/3/2010 12:59:00 PM)

    Although, I am girl.I have to confess that you are really true and totally right! !
    A poem written perfectly :) !
    10

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  • Denise Bekker ~* The Sound *~ (6/3/2010 12:25:00 PM)

    A brilliant write! This describes just how complexed a woman can be. The latter of the poem has the emphasis of a woman scorned! well done, : D

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  • Elias Barcelona (6/3/2010 12:03:00 PM)

    Perfect really i couldnt have said it better myself
    10/10

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  • Kieran J96 (6/3/2010 11:59:00 AM)

    this is a really good poem and it reads clearly and gets the message across
    i really like

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