Her voracious energy
............................captured life.
She devoured days,
...................poetically climbed
The mountain of 'being',
..............................and thrived
On romance,
........being born to a new time
When expressions of love
...................became accepted,
Yet still in man's world,
..............soon scribed her way
And another fine classic
..........................she perfected,
Proving female persistence
.....................could win the day.
To women of substance
................thought had occured
That then was the time
.......their voice could be heard
Yet still in man's world, ..............soon scribed her way And another fine classic ..........................she perfected, Proving female persistence .....................could win the day. Kudos to you Fay for this brilliant write on the persistence of women to hold their own even in a male bastion...10++++++
And another fine classic ..........................she perfected, ................................................. It is remarkable and thin the message, Fay... 10x10.. All the best, Tsira
Yet she strives so hard to make her presence felt in a man's world. Excellent write. Absolutely wonderful! ! ! 10+ from me.
such is the woman of virtue too. wonderful write fay.
Ah yes, I liked this one about women of substance...well penned. Ruthie
women's voices should be heard all over the world...and in the world of poetry....!
A strong, beautiful tribute to women in poetry and in life.10/10 Love, SandraX
The last few lines are significant...here's to more and more women of substance!
That you are! May your poetic sebstance forever flood the world with inspiration and light.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
wonderful style and art of poetry.......a fine description of a woman in substance...well done!