Wondrous World Poem by Eindaray Kyaw

Wondrous World

Rating: 4.5


Whenever I see cute birds in the sky
I wish, may I be able to skillfully fly
I think, I will be the happiest guy!

Whenever I hear busy bees' chatting
I wish, may they be clapping
I think, they are my audiences without sin!

Whenever I overheard lazy fish's snoring
I wish, may they swim by super-high engines
I think, they are micro-jeeps with wondrous fins!

Whenever I smell Mrs.Cow's fresh milk
I wish, may she help her calves from sick
I think, she plays a maternal song without lyrics!

Whenever I taste slim snake's poison
I wish, may it be the same with favourite caffeine
I think, no pal trusts me if I fill even to the brim!

Whenever I play with my sincere dog
I wish, may I magic time to stop
I think, he gives me a key to lonely lock!

Whenever I brush my kitty's complicated fur
I wish, may this be the solution for multiple wars
I think, patience and kindness can bear a peace of flower!

Whenever I watch atomic ants' trooping
I wish, may they be alert from cruel thumbing
I think, they are an army that never ceases training!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mark Dillon 06 September 2012

nice thoughts, nice poem, not enough good thoughts, if there were, the world would not be so troubled

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Aung Si 05 September 2012

Pretty poem! You can compose the usual events with amazing idea.I like this.I appreciate u.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 05 September 2012

caffeine snake, atomic ants are different kind of imagination! Could you write about Myanmar?

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Amber Glistener 05 September 2012

Very interesting.

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Zero Ro 05 September 2012

Grateful heart! ! Try to know concealing of natural phenomena!

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Razieh Jale 06 December 2017

Thanks without your poem i cannot do my assignment😂😂😂

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Eindaray Kyaw 10 September 2012

Thank you Pilo..I accept your suggestion..I will change that words from sick instead of no sick!

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Philo Yan 10 September 2012

You have conjured a wondrous world with your wondrous words. Though I do concur with Sunny Rose and her suggestion or try I wish, she keep her calves from sick

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Nader Baheri 07 September 2012

nice and amazing.you have shown your intention in a nice written.

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Unwritten Soul 06 September 2012

Wonderful poem, it has so much wonderful things to see if we able to deep see inside a simple life..great idea! _Unwritten Soul

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