The words just flee from my head,
to the paper in front of me.
They tell of love and sorrows be.
They also tell of other things.
Of happiness abound,
of little creatures.
In the air and on the ground.
Of seasons one to four.
Of cold hearts and warm love.
Of arms reaching out,
for a safe haven,
or shelter from a storm.
The words they tell of many things,
between the lines written.
Only a keen eye,
will find what lies there hidden.
This is very well written and you play with words. Beautiful.
David: Lisa and Duncan 's thoughts are my own. I find your thoughts as as mind, even your titles are simular, started reading your works, as of now charles garcia
beautifully expressed David, I always remember the soong 'You say it best when you say nothing at all', similar concept. Bravo.
Well, I just found something beautiful in the structure of these lines Wonderful expression David Love duncan X
Ah, David, you have written a gem here. I especially like: 'arms reaching out, for a safe haven, ' That is a lovely and sweet image. I'm glad I finally have had the chance to get back here to read this one. Well done, Poet! alicia
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Fabulous, excellent poem, WORDS, oh what a wonderful gift. Thankyou David----Melvina--