Dr subhendu kar

Gold Star - 6,730 Points (Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India)

)))))))))))))) World Lost Into Crowd ((((((((((((((( - Poem by Dr subhendu kar

Oh dear friend wait a bit onto the dusk
Life has never forsaken your dream
sun stoops over heads bristling warmth
earth is least hurried high by your desire

passage plexus waits as long as you wish
time never debars you to sprinkle your beams
fact is the reality as truth embraces the hope
passion is never be enticed upon by clouds

rain descends by crooning of clouds dark
heart yet betides by the slake of the tunes
as beauty of love makes me apart by the blow
did I not follow you until moon comes?

i do remember amber glow by novels of night
as speckles of whisper wakes me up again
I look through window asking for the love
where is world lost into crowd of unknowns


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  • Krista Churchill (10/28/2008 5:43:00 PM)

    very well put great poem (Report)Reply

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  • Seema Chowdhury (10/27/2008 8:43:00 PM)

    such a lovely composition, full of desires and hopes. very inspiring wordings. i hope you will find what you are looking for. take care (Report)Reply

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  • Miriam Maia PaduaMiriam Maia Padua (10/26/2008 7:42:00 AM)

    oh, what a piece.! such an inspiration for anybody to be patient in in acquiring their dreams. It touches me a lot...your piece is very meaningful to me...enough to bring down tears down my cheeks but with a smile...it will definitely serve as an inspiration to anybody....who dreams of fulfillment in life...a 10+ for this very beautiful and inspiring piece.
    God bless you...always
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  • Anjali Sinha (10/25/2008 10:45:00 AM)

    hey Shub,

    really a lovely piece -we are a lost
    world into that crowd of doubts and hates
    +++++++++10 and A+++ dear fren,
    regards anju
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  • Rinzu Susan Rajan (10/20/2008 5:17:00 AM)

    LOTS OF TRUTHFUL EMOTIONS THERE...

    A REALLY NICE PIECE...
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  • Thomas Kurkoski (10/15/2008 9:57:00 AM)

    An absolutely brilliant piece full of truth and emotion. It doesn't get much better than that! Cheers,
    Thomas K
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  • Thad Wilk (10/12/2008 10:59:00 PM)

    A sad poem, written masterfully! Thank you for sharing Dr Kar! *10*!
    Best wishes!
    Friend Thad
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  • C T Heart (10/12/2008 12:57:00 PM)

    heart yet betides by the slake of the tunes
    as beauty of love makes me apart by the blow
    ---
    Lovely lines, i loved them so much for it is such a beautiful piece to share forth...a 10.
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 12, 2008



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