Oh dear friend wait a bit onto the dusk
Life has never forsaken your dream
sun stoops over heads bristling warmth
earth is least hurried high by your desire
passage plexus waits as long as you wish
time never debars you to sprinkle your beams
fact is the reality as truth embraces the hope
passion is never be enticed upon by clouds
rain descends by crooning of clouds dark
heart yet betides by the slake of the tunes
as beauty of love makes me apart by the blow
did I not follow you until moon comes?
i do remember amber glow by novels of night
as speckles of whisper wakes me up again
I look through window asking for the love
where is world lost into crowd of unknowns
A sad poem, written masterfully! Thank you for sharing Dr Kar! *10*! Best wishes! Friend Thad
An absolutely brilliant piece full of truth and emotion. It doesn't get much better than that! Cheers, Thomas K
very well put great poem
such a lovely composition, full of desires and hopes. very inspiring wordings. i hope you will find what you are looking for. take care
oh, what a piece.! such an inspiration for anybody to be patient in in acquiring their dreams. It touches me a lot...your piece is very meaningful to me...enough to bring down tears down my cheeks but with a smile...it will definitely serve as an inspiration to anybody....who dreams of fulfillment in life...a 10+ for this very beautiful and inspiring piece. God bless you...always
hey Shub, really a lovely piece -we are a lost world into that crowd of doubts and hates +++++++++10 and A+++ dear fren, regards anju
LOTS OF TRUTHFUL EMOTIONS THERE... A REALLY NICE PIECE...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
heart yet betides by the slake of the tunes as beauty of love makes me apart by the blow --- Lovely lines, i loved them so much for it is such a beautiful piece to share forth...a 10.