Would You Spread, Humanity? Poem by merna ibrahim

Would You Spread, Humanity?

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Humanity is the best thing at all
If we spread it, it wont fall
humanity is the pity, sympathy and mercy
people need humanity to live in peace and without envy.

If it is there, we will find love, passion and goals.
If people treats with it, we will circulate love and liberty in the whole world
I wonder If you ever wonder the same and I still wonder
why we are asking for peace, humanity and fairness?
And If we congregated and co-operated with each other
We will achieve them with easiness.

Its an opportunity for us to co-operate and achieve all our goals
In the game of life, we must win every moment and we mustn't lose although a second
We must unite with each other and fulfill our targets, all together
So, we must appreciate that humanity is the best thing at all.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 11 January 2009

Life is very precious, like water.We need water to live so treasure it.Nice writes Merna.

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Omar Ibrahim 29 March 2009

very good name for a poem..perfect.good job

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Menna Gamal 02 April 2009

good poem, agreat idea, astrong sentences, well done and keep writing

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Muhammad Ali 18 April 2009

my friend! ! there is something in vertical dimensions...... before we should progress (i think) spread humanity within our innerselves first very nice piece of peace this poem is lovely :)

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Mohammed Hassan 09 July 2010

well done merna, i like that feeling from you as being a member of this mad world, you are right when you said 'Humanity is the best thing at all If we spread it, it wont fall humanity is the pity, sympathy and mercy people need humanity to live in peace and without envy' this stanza is killing me well penned merna keep it up.

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 15 November 2009

I wonder If you ever wonder the same and I still wonder... My Humane Friend! I touched your INNOCENT HUMANITY throughout the poem! bright thoughts! a talented girl! PeaCe&LoVe. Thanks For Sharing Merna

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HaZeM PaKKaR 31 July 2009

'' why we are asking for peace, humanity and fairness? '' you did answer this question very well.. you wrote this poem.. i wonder you are really 14.. i am sure you have a very good talent and also a very good sense.. please let me know about your new piece..

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Kesav Easwaran 01 June 2009

humanity is the essence of co-existence...good poem Merna...you convey your noble thoughts very well in your write...10

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Afzal Shauq 25 May 2009

wow its really a good poem and it feels to my heart because, the humanity to care is my craze and dream..I may add this poem to your comments in my new book... very charming poem is this one.. love the idea and your thought which positive and humanitariun... like this stanza... Humanity is the best thing at all If we spread it, it wont fall humanity is the pity, sympathy and mercy people need humanity to live in peace and without envy.

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