Aufie Zophy

Gold Star - 18,127 Points (18 October 1964)

Y// Dear Cloud - Poem by Aufie Zophy

Dear Cloud,
When will you break your silence
When can I hear the story
of your unthinkable journey
of the things you've seen,
of the winds that've blown

Dear Cloud,
When will I hear your tale,
the secret of your magic game
shape of sheep and then of fish
shape of face and then of birds
and then again completely formless

Dear Lady Cloud
How much I want to hear your music
How much I want to read your poetry
How much I want to see your dance
Please reveal to me the story,
the secret, your private art

Topic(s) of this poem: art, beauty, cloud, secret


Poet's Notes about The Poem

In this season, when the monsoon season wants to start but did not yet fully do so, the skies in Kelantan (the amazing special province of Malaysia where I live) are pure beauty. It got me a bit in a poetic mood...

Comments about Y// Dear Cloud by Aufie Zophy

  • Edward Kofi Louis (2/16/2016 7:18:00 AM)


    To praise the works of nature. Nice piece of work. (Report) Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/25/2015 1:19:00 AM)


    Well expressive poem so nicely presented. I like this poem very much. Thanks for sharing....10 (Report) Reply

  • (11/22/2015 8:20:00 PM)


    An expressive and an engaging write, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rahman Henry (11/10/2015 3:04:00 AM)


    I've added this poem to MyPoemList and I like to rate it: 10++++++++++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rahman Henry (11/10/2015 3:03:00 AM)


    Well penned, wonderful poem; I really enjoyed a lot. Beautifully presented..... (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (11/10/2015 2:51:00 AM)


    Dear Aufie,
    Coulds ask me to tell you
    Listen to the rain, it is a story by my tears
    Listen to the rain, everydrops are my fallen wish
    and dear Aufie
    Listen to the wind as it blows
    As it is a journey by me when wind push me to go

    now i tell all words from clouds to u
    hahahahahaha
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    Hans Vr Hans Vr (11/28/2015 9:30:00 AM)

    Dear Soul,
    There are so many types of clouds in our skies.
    We have the teary ones,
    the thundery ones,
    the cumulonimbi or towery ones,
    then we have the ones who keep changing shape and are so wonderfully silent
    and appear to be on an eternal journey.
    This poem was about that type of clouds. :)

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 10, 2015

Poem Edited: Saturday, November 21, 2015


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