Years And Scars Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Years And Scars

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Every passing year is like a scar
Left on the body of time
To remember our past

They will never return
Nor will give you respite
It leaves an indelible mark forever

Start may be good or bad
Yet the middle in pure mixture
Happiness and sorrow is the ultimate calculator

Beneath the carpet of months
Silently lay the ashes of our domes
We can see the glimpses but cannot alter a thing

Seasons have made us dance to its tunes
The music played by flying symphony
Is now recorded in the cloud's tears

The scar if scratched will leave
The wounds open
With no remedy to cure the past

So let the scar be in the body of time
To heal by itself
As the years kept passing by.

Tuesday, December 29, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life,life and death,philosophy,years
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 22 March 2016

Scars of life! As the years kept passing by. Nice work.

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T Rajan Evol 10 February 2016

Superb

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Kelly Kurt 29 December 2015

Most scars eventually fade, as do their memories. Reopening a wound seldom holds benefits. Wondefully conceived and written, Mohammed

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Nosheen Irfan 29 December 2015

A very realistic view of life presented beautifully with lovely imagery. Every moment of life leaves its mark. Yes, its better not to scratch scars. Let scars heal by themselves with the passage of time. Great philosophy.

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M Asim Nehal 29 December 2015

Thanks much for lovely comment, I really appreciate your views, Thanks again.

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