megan goldsmith

You - Poem by megan goldsmith

my pain is to much to hide
i need help
but no one's there
im thinking about commiting suicide

im hurting
but your to happy to see
im crying
but you just walk on by
i wanna commite suicide

im screaming
but you cant hear me
im bleeding
but you never notice
so tonight im going to commite suicide
and you'll never know im gone

Comments about You by megan goldsmith

  • (7/20/2009 12:16:00 PM)

    nicly done
    so when you see my body...don't pretend to cry
    because we both know that would be a lie

    No Reason To Care
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  • (5/22/2009 5:47:00 PM)

    i feel you pain and i bet their is someone who cares (Report) Reply

  • (12/4/2007 8:57:00 PM)

    i friends all ways seem to just not care any more, until i found 1 person who cares...but hes gone now (Report) Reply

  • (11/11/2007 4:32:00 PM)

    i know wat megan is goin through, i felt da same way wen i talked and nobody listened, when i cryed and nobody cared. it feels like shit and it feels like ur al alone. thank god i found a friend who cares for me and listens 2 wat i have 2 say. (thank you Lili.) (Report) Reply

  • (8/10/2007 2:12:00 PM)

    tell me you are still alive? I know wot u are going thru but u wil pull through (Report) Reply

  • (6/26/2007 1:07:00 AM)

    Please tell me this is just a poem. I would hate to think no one listened to your cry out for help. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, June 8, 2007

Poem Edited: Wednesday, March 9, 2011

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