You And I Together (Revised) Poem by Heather Burns

You And I Together (Revised)

Rating: 4.1


When are
dreams
and
reality
ever to
meet

My
basking
in your
presence

Running
my hands
over your
body

Touching
your soft
spots

Enjoying
your
presence

You
lying
in my
arms

Renewing
our love
vows

You and I
together
enjoying
each other

Emerging
as one.



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Wednesday, August 14, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 14 August 2013

A beautiful poem. When you become one, that is real true love.

1 2 Reply
Unwritten Soul 14 August 2013

Lo and Ve met, Love as one! _Soul

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Lorraine Colon 16 August 2013

Loved this one, Heather. Very passionate!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 14 August 2013

Reality of emerging as one. That is what true love is. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

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Fraser 29 March 2022

I love my life

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Sylvia FC 05 July 2020

Mesmerizing, most beautifully said and worded. Poem YES! 14 x 24 love Yes, I love this love poem, Heather, Emerging as one. That's true love. Full of emotions. Very passionate!

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Dr Antony Theodore 18 November 2018

Running my hands over your body Touching your soft spots Emerging as one, very fine poem on love and romance.. full of emotions thank u. tony

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Sankar Sehanabis 24 October 2014

Ahhh! A sweet poem. Really passionate.

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Leloudia Migdali 10 September 2014

Awesome! I loved every line of it!

0 3 Reply
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