You don't exist
In vapours
In ambiguity of silent
Exhalations
You exist in my life
Like the air I inhale
Not knowing
It keeps me alive
You don't just exist
In uncombed strands
Of thoughts
Or in sudden sparks
Of remembrance
You exist like the sun
That comes to go
And goes to return.
Thank you sharing such beautiful thoughts, dear Nosheen. Enjoyed reading them.....10
You exist like the sun That comes to go And goes to return......fabulous lines of amazing truth.
Really a Nosheenic poem. Nostalgic of your earlier love poems. Extremely happy to see you back.
Exquisite beauty of a poem. " You exist in my life / Like the air/ I inhale /Not knowing /It keeps me alive".. excellent sublime poetry. Loved reading.5 *s. Myfav.
A beautiful expression of the naturalness of love and relationship. Very well written
Congratulations Nosheen. This poem ranks 42 in today's Member Poems. Most deserving.
Superb...You exist like the sun That comes to go And goes to return.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I had posted a remark on the poem yesterday. But it does not appear here yet. What is wrong?