You Exist Like The Sun Poem by Nosheen Irfan

You Exist Like The Sun

Rating: 5.0


You don't exist
In vapours
In ambiguity of silent
Exhalations
You exist in my life
Like the air I inhale
Not knowing
It keeps me alive

You don't just exist
In uncombed strands
Of thoughts
Or in sudden sparks
Of remembrance
You exist like the sun
That comes to go
And goes to return.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 22 March 2022

a remarkable poem, a loveliest justified ode, a sterling poem to my heart,5 Stars full score, and myriads more

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Well Wisher 22 March 2022

This poem has the strength of language properly incorporated into each stansa.

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PA 22 March 2022

Magnificent poetry!

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Unnikrishnan E S 23 March 2022

Exquisite beauty of a poem. " You exist in my life / Like the air/ I inhale /Not knowing /It keeps me alive".. excellent sublime poetry. Loved reading.5 *s. Myfav.

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Unnikrishnan E S 23 March 2022

Really a Nosheenic poem. Nostalgic of your earlier love poems. Extremely happy to see you back.

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soren Barrett 30 March 2022

A beautiful expression of the naturalness of love and relationship. Very well written

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Unnikrishnan E S 30 March 2022

Congratulations Nosheen. This poem ranks 42 in today's Member Poems. Most deserving.

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Richard Wlodarski 25 March 2022

Beautiful analogy to complement exquisite poetry.

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M. Asim Nehal 24 March 2022

Superb...You exist like the sun That comes to go And goes to return.

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Unnikrishnan E S 24 March 2022

I had posted a remark on the poem yesterday. But it does not appear here yet. What is wrong?

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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