You Give Life To Me Poem by Reshma Ramesh

You Give Life To Me

Rating: 5.0


From the broken twigs
Like the milk in the moon
From the clouds in the night
You shape me
With the scents of the sandalwood
From petals of innocence
With the silken threads
You weave me
From the shimmers in the sun
To the glint in your eyes
From the virginal light
You mold me
From the colors in a prism
With a breath of zephyr
Like a honeycomb
You carve me
From the green in the leaf
You pour life into me
From wet brown clay
You sculpt me
With a little from the gravel
A bit from golden dust
With the tunes of love
You make me
With drops of faith
Little bit of intrigue
Like in orange
You build me
Like a mason of love
Craftsmen of desire
Architect of passion
You give life to me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Hitesh Sheth 23 April 2009

From the fibre of love From the strengh of mountains From suppleness of bamboo From innocence of child You weave my frame.............................Good Write.............

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Randy Hogan 23 April 2009

Broken ☽ beams ...........SO......... still on ♁ so silent ..NEXT TO THE. ebbing TIDE I await ..........IS MY....... ~~~~~~♀ ~~~~~

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Alison Cassidy 23 April 2009

A sensitively penned devotional piece with some fine, inspired images. In particular I liked the 'milk in the moon' and 'a little bit of intrigue'. Excellent poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 29 April 2009

A very vivid word painting. You are an excellent imagist. Love, Sandrax

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Mamta Agarwal 30 April 2009

wonderful imagery. agree with Sandra and Karin. 10 Mamta

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Muhammad Ali 06 May 2009

beautiful..... a nice poem to read Reshma! lovely work

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Ashraful Musaddeq 06 May 2009

Very nice, nice metaphor, love it,10++

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 05 May 2009

Architect of passion giving life to me-beautiful well written

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C. P. Sharma 04 May 2009

Poetry par excellence, perfect imagery, flow, rhyme and rhythm. Really flawless. I loved it from the core of my heart, don't know how to say it. CP

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premji premji 01 May 2009

being a reader, i give life to you dear poet friend...........

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Reshma Ramesh

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Bangalore, India
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