You Lie Poem by Yasser Koor

You Lie

Rating: 4.9


One day in autumn day we met
The smell of the winter was near
And the leaves of the trees were wet
We were alone under the pines trees

And you promised me ''eternal love'
I remember that moment you were on your knees
You said 'I love you'
But you lied
I made all my love is for you. Don't you hear?
And you said 'I'll love you forever my dear'
But you lied.

When we met the night was starry
When I wanted to go you were saying 'stay please'
I love you for my entire life deary
You said 'I'll be with you for a million years'
But you lied

You had been the one for me
But now you are one of my enemies
I annihilated and released your name from my memories
You said 'I'll carry your child'
But you lied

You're the black snake that's in my dreams
Don't cry I don't want to hear your screams
You'll pay for blood you'll face my fears
I want to leave you without spilling tears
'Cause I know you'll come to me on your knees
I don't want you to drink my tears
I want you to feel my disease
You said 'I'll love you forever'
But you lied

I was the man who wanted to save you
But our time is over my life with you
Our time all was a lie because the snake is you
I ran with open arms to you
But you gave me the knife
You said 'I'll be the mother of your child'
You said 'I love you'
But you lied.

Listen ……..
I know it was a fault
To praise my love for you
The only thing you really love
Is yourself, yourself and you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elaine O' Keeffe 16 July 2008

I know the feeling well.

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sara }i{ 03 August 2008

I really like this poem alot and it's really show your feelings good job, peace and love ;)

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Ashraful Musaddeq 13 September 2008

'Listen …….. I know it was a fault To praise my love for you The only thing you really love Is yourself, yourself and you' nice observation.

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Shimon Weinroth 25 September 2008

alas love is too often a fickle emotion and there might not necessarily have been an intent to decieve, this is a passionate poem with unrequited love and compassion, a romantic filled with emotions and notions

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Sarah Abdullah 04 October 2008

Listen …….. I know it was a fault To praise my love for you The only thing you really love Is yourself, yourself and you Fine lines....eternal Love is over rated and no matter how many time it is said It never comes true...Sad yet True

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*Smile4ever* 07 May 2009

Very touching.. But brother do u think u can curse the one u love.. Naa u can't because its u only who loved her so lot.. But it pains so much when u remind her second by second.. Is'nt? God bless u smile4ever

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tara star 02 May 2009

I hate lairs...these ppl never deserve any one's love...and i think this single poem can make them realize their mistake...i kindly liked it...

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Sundos Mohammad 07 December 2008

realllyy greaaaaaat! ! u seems deeply hurted! ! ! ! ! ! sry for that! ! keep it up! ! thnks for sharing it! !

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Monlano Kim 26 November 2008

Has some real depth and hatred. So much emotion! I love the last part! !

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Anjali Sinha 08 November 2008

'Listen …….. I know it was a fault To praise my love for you The only thing you really love Is yourself, yourself and you' such a fitting finale to your poem i loved the ending. ++++++++10 regards anju

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