I Lose My Girl Poem by Yasser Koor

I Lose My Girl

Rating: 4.7


Alone …Alone …Alone
It’s so hard to be alone
With whole my family
With whole my friends
However I think I’m here alone.

Sad …Sad …Sad...
I lost a beautiful thing I had
I told my mum I told my dad
That I feel good I don’t feel bad
Should I feeling happy or feeling sad
I don’t know I don’t understand

Light …Light …light …
Dark is here where is the light
I can’t see I can’t think I can’t write
And for my happiness I’ll fight
To know what the difference
Between the wrong and the right

Feel …Feel …Feel …
Love is not easy thing to feel
She hurts my heart, I try to heal
She leaves me with the pain
She leaves me with the tears.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 01 September 2008

I can't recommend this one. When I first saw it, I thought I would, but the words don't complement the structure of the poem. That really makes it worse not better. GW62

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Ashraful Musaddeq 07 September 2008

'She leaves me with the pain She leaves me with the tears.' A painful composition of love.

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samar Halabi 09 September 2008

mmm I don't know why but I really liked it it is really wonderful poem

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Little Hatila ;) 01 October 2008

'love is not an easy thing to feel' was the greatest part of this lovely poem...it is really a nice poem....keep going

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Anjali Sinha 05 October 2008

yasser-awh so sad and alone dont worry she'll be back lovely write lots of rhyming and alliteration a ++++++++10 you deserve regards anjalie

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well expressed feelings deeply and touchingly said

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sings well.. I love it!

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Blue Eyes 18 November 2008

the repitition of alone emphasizes on the meaning.i think its a great poem that has many great aspects.

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&&angel4ever && 14 October 2008

This your third poem talking about your lost love or your love that ends you are badly injured GUY iam sure you have a real story to tell i hope you find your girl never lose her again

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Reshma Ramesh 10 October 2008

aweeee hugs to you............nice poem

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