Your Eyes Poem by indira babbellapati

Your Eyes

Rating: 2.9


in the seas of your eyes
i see the reflection of
the sun rise and
the sun set
at the same time
i also see the sparkling high tide
of a full-moon night
and splinters of glassy waves
of a bright summer day
i see the mysterious depths
of the sea i can never negotiate
hidden behind the fluidy veil
that protects the whites of your eyes

i stroll along
the enigmatic
sands of your shore
at all times of the day
and the night

30sep2009
19.58hrs

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Maitreyee Joshi 01 October 2009

i just loved the way you expressed the way you perceive that loved ones eyes.thanks ma'am.

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 02 October 2009

ohh yes, and- 'your eyes are the eternity's expression of its absoluteness.'

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A stunning and mystic poem on the reflection and depth of a loved one's eyes. I felt I was at the sea shore with you as your images were superb! 10 love Karin

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Ranjit Ravindran 04 October 2009

I often wondered why does a portrait look empty even though the frame is filled with the subject. Professional photographers always tell me that its the eyes that tells the story. Mostly shooting bespectacled subjects causes the glare to washout their eyes. Loved this poem not only for its artistic projection but also for its message that justifies the above problem. Thanks a lot! A sweet 10

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 05 October 2009

Stunning Indeed, such beautiful poetry in every read... Andy 10

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 23 October 2009

In you eyes … I see many unseen things too. Nice poem Didi Ten++ UK Thanks for comments Cordially invite to read and comment on Enigmatic Navel Lie Sly or other poems. niv

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Rachel Butler 10 October 2009

I see the mysterious depths Rachel Ann Butler

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Patrick A. Martin 09 October 2009

I remember this when I looked into the eyes of my children thank you dear Indira

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Allemagne Roßmann 09 October 2009

Pleasure of a moment lasts for a moment Pleasures collected from pain makes the moment..... a good write!

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Catrina Heart 07 October 2009

A loving and caring soul you have seeing the deep reflection of one's eyes! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Great poem indeed! ! ! ! Love it! ! ! ! ! !

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indira babbellapati

indira babbellapati

visakhapatnam, india
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