indira babbellapati

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Your Eyes - Poem by indira babbellapati

in the seas of your eyes
i see the reflection of
the sun rise and
the sun set
at the same time
i also see the sparkling high tide
of a full-moon night
and splinters of glassy waves
of a bright summer day
i see the mysterious depths
of the sea i can never negotiate
hidden behind the fluidy veil
that protects the whites of your eyes

i stroll along
the enigmatic
sands of your shore
at all times of the day
and the night


Comments about Your Eyes by indira babbellapati

  • (10/23/2009 11:24:00 AM)

    In you eyes …
    I see many unseen things too.
    Nice poem Didi

    Thanks for comments
    Cordially invite to read and comment on
    Enigmatic Navel
    Lie Sly or other poems.
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  • (10/10/2009 7:40:00 AM)

    I see the mysterious depths

    Rachel Ann Butler
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  • (10/9/2009 7:15:00 PM)

    I remember this when I looked into the eyes of my children thank you dear Indira (Report) Reply

  • Allemagne Roßmann (10/9/2009 6:28:00 AM)

    Pleasure of a moment lasts for a moment
    Pleasures collected from pain makes the moment.....

    a good write!
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  • (10/7/2009 11:26:00 PM)

    A loving and caring soul you have seeing the deep reflection of one's eyes! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Great poem indeed! ! ! ! Love it! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • (10/7/2009 2:23:00 PM)

    Lucky you, the poet, who can see two seas and the sun rise and the sun set at the same time looking into someone's eyes! Beautiful poem! (Report) Reply

  • (10/6/2009 3:35:00 AM)

    Got omni vision still Poet quests for more and …well let poet say in next poem.
    Nice ten
    Cordially invite to my page.
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  • (10/5/2009 11:23:00 AM)

    The love in his eyes you see is expressed beautifully. (Report) Reply

  • (10/5/2009 10:27:00 AM)

    This poem is against infidelity, is quite, super and wonderful. (Report) Reply

  • Sarwar Chowdhury (10/5/2009 10:06:00 AM)

    beautiful mystic disclosure! nice phrasology! (Report) Reply

  • (10/5/2009 5:07:00 AM)

    Stunning Indeed, such beautiful poetry in every read... Andy 10 (Report) Reply

  • (10/4/2009 4:47:00 AM)

    I often wondered why does a portrait look empty even though the frame is filled with the subject. Professional photographers always tell me that its the eyes that tells the story. Mostly shooting bespectacled subjects causes the glare to washout their eyes.

    Loved this poem not only for its artistic projection but also for its message that justifies the above problem. Thanks a lot!
    A sweet 10
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  • (10/3/2009 8:40:00 AM)

    A stunning and mystic poem on the reflection and depth of a loved one's eyes. I felt I was at the sea shore with you as your images were superb! 10 love Karin (Report) Reply

  • (10/2/2009 4:22:00 AM)

    ohh yes, and-
    'your eyes are the eternity's expression of its absoluteness.'
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  • (10/1/2009 11:41:00 AM)

    i just loved the way you expressed the way you perceive that loved ones eyes.thanks ma'am. (Report) Reply

  • (10/1/2009 9:21:00 AM)

    You see everything in 'eyes'; but as you stroll along the sand on the sea shore...? ? ? to me, merger is not compete, indira.....otherwise how can you be subjective n objective? ? ? Or is it the case of vivid imagination; sort of possessed n obsessed....; sort of, being in trance..? ? ? (Report) Reply

  • Sandra Martyres (10/1/2009 8:51:00 AM)

    beautifully expressed feelings Indira - your eyes is a lovely piece (Report) Reply

  • (10/1/2009 7:24:00 AM)

    The eye's have it by a longshot (Report) Reply

  • (10/1/2009 6:20:00 AM)

    your eyes just yes always remembering......and amazing....... (Report) Reply

  • (10/1/2009 5:53:00 AM)

    wooow that really amzin, i loved it, i know how that feel ^_^ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 1, 2009

Poem Edited: Sunday, November 1, 2009

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