Per. Nig.

Your Eyes

Grand rivers
Of honey and milk
Gentle breeze
So soft as silk
Beautiful idols
Wherever you think
Whatever you want
To eat, to drink
No one feels pain or grief
I tell all things in brief
My love!
I don't want your paradise
I just want to burn in your eyes

(2008/2/12)

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Poem Submitted: Tuesday, February 12, 2008
Poem Edited: Friday, June 24, 2016

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  • Rachel Butler (10/28/2009 1:43:00 PM)

    'I just want to burn in your eyes'


    Rachel Ann Butler

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  • Shabre Moore (1/22/2009 8:17:00 AM)

    now thats usmthing ther i would tell my boyfriend now thats jus beautiful i really do love it alot dead serious its really lovely i loveit alot

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  • Subbaraman N V (11/29/2008 12:30:00 AM)

    A nice write! Let us love all, serve all! Let us help ever and hurt never!

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  • Leon & Sarah Harris (10/18/2008 5:13:00 PM)

    great write my friend!

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  • Tj Becker (10/17/2008 8:49:00 AM)

    Another sweet gentle write. Your poems are relaxing and give the reader a feeling of relaxation and warmth.

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  • Katie Watt (10/16/2008 5:49:00 PM)

    Nawww i love it...

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  • ♥ Brie {And Eric} ♥ (10/15/2008 9:43:00 AM)

    very well said. love it. so sweet
    -brie

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  • Tsira Goge (10/7/2008 3:18:00 AM)

    I just want to burn in your eyes...
    .................................................
    well... 10...

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  • Ershad MazumderErshad Mazumder (10/3/2008 6:43:00 AM)

    From today I am with your theme and style.

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  • Tissa Calvert (9/25/2008 3:00:00 PM)

    very nice and meaningful

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  • good bye (2/13/2008 2:28:00 PM)

    beautiful write, thanks for sharing

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  • ... ... (2/12/2008 8:43:00 AM)

    All I can say is... *siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiggggggggggggghhhhhhhhhh* What a poem! It makes me feel like I want to fall in love again. Beautiful! Tu rosa.

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  • BEAU GOLDEN (2/12/2008 2:39:00 AM)

    Adding this to my favorites! I like it better than my 'why do i love you'
    Beau

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