Can You hold my hand today
Time has not been good off late
Troubled waters; Life is in a mess
Broken I am, in a total distress...
Life was so beautiful, the day you came
Then I got busy to earn money and fame...
Took you for granted, diverted my mind
Now learnt my lesson, that i was Blind....
Can you give me one hug so warm
So that I froget all pain, all harm..
Nothing's working for me at this time
Hug me in your arms, I will be fine....
We men always feel, we're much stronger then you
But I need you my love to support me ture...
We may look tough, but we're weaker from within
So show me a way, for my life to begin....
Can you once love me, like you always do
It'll heel my pain, with your touch so true...
Wish to reprise my life, with all my heart
Your love is all I need, to make a fresh start! ! !
Lifes distractions can shift our focus and what matters most becomes unseen. You portrayed that well in this poem. Well done; D
the importance and support of love in ones life very much evident.. also asking for a second chance.explaining and taking all the blame for the previous mistakes is very well potrayed.. but probably true love doesn't need explanations and no second chances.. its a lifetime treasure nice write
the importance and support of love in ones life very much evident.. also asking for a second chance.explaining and taking all the blame for the previous mistakes is very well potrayed.. but probably true love doesn't need explanations and no second chances.. its a lifetime treasure nice write
Another 'romantico' poem from u, well what more can i say other than woah! it is so true... This poem will please everyone who read it...Each line simply attached to the vibes of feeling..and the rhythms, perfect! the theme of 'amore' is already mastered by u! keep the great work.......
enjoyed reading it....b'fully rhymed...i hope you get your girl back.
You have so much of love in your heart........ Your this poem is also beautiful, a very much truth..... And each an every words and lines are properly placed........... Great job buddy......... You are really a great writter........ God bless
: ] Beautiful as always ur poems never get old... i hope u find her Rohit i really do: ]
We may look tough, but we're weaker from within yes, absolutly right, men are strong physically, , , , , but they lose their all strength at one place, , , , they are broken, helpless at one point
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I'm sure you've a lot of support.