Your "Love", Huh? ….Ridiculous! …[ Bri's Response To Lora Colon's " Love " Poem: " Together…..My Love And I " ] Poem by Bri Edwards
Your "Love", Huh? ….Ridiculous! …[ Bri's Response To Lora Colon's " Love " Poem: " Together…..My Love And I " ]
It's tough for me, Lora, [ you sound HAPPY ],
to find myself making you now feel ‘crappy',
but, because I DO care, I tell you, I SWEAR,
your "Love" had best [NOW! ] go...elsewhere.
‘cause I've got photos (8x10 glossies) [I DO]
of ‘him' making a damn FOOL out of....YOU! !
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Although you've thought he is so GRAND,
[that was exactly his plan …as I understand],
he's a wolf-in-sheep's-clothing, as some say.
You should see how "love" is when he is AWAY..
….from you.
He's got a girl, or 2, in EACH shabby bar,
and, with EACH one he has gone way too ‘far', …
so far and often you'd NOT WANT to know!
When he's with you, it's just 1 BIG SHOW!
But don't worry; I've got ‘it' under control, I DO!
You'll NEVER see him again; I promise.It's TRUE!
(December ….1st ….2019)
;)))))
bri
p.s. i originally misspelled "Ridiculous" (in my title)as "Rediculous".
i 'ALWAYS' spell it "rediculous", but the computer underlined it when i pasted the title into responses to the two comments i'd gotten by today, December 11th.
Hopefully i'll have it corrected 'in a jiffy' aka 'in a hurry'.
:)))))))))))))))))
Ha ha. i just acknowledged receipt of Kumarmani's and Aniruddha's comments. AND i noticed that " Rediculous" was misspelled, which i plan to correct SOON! It should be spelled " Ridiculous" ... Ain't it ridiculous? bri :)
An angel showing way on the eve of closing year, showing new hope for the coming new year at the rear, And in way only Bri can What else, with his poetic pen.
But don't worry; I've got ‘it' under control, I DO! You'll NEVER see him again; I promise.It's TRUE......touching concluding with an insightful solace. A beautiful poem on love, life and deceit is stunningly delineated.10
Most of Lora's fine poems deal with love and lovers OR a lack or loss of love/lovers. bri ;) to MyPoemList
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4/30/2024 5:12:10 AM # 1.0.0.1119
I've always learned that the time to start worrying is when someone reassures, " Don't worry." That last 2-line stanza is priceless....so open to interpretation... Awesome, Bri!