Your Smile- 01 (Haiku) Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

Your Smile- 01 (Haiku)

Rating: 5.0


The smile on your lips

The crescent moon waist-dipping on the Western-sea

In a muse of elixir.

Your Smile- 01 (Haiku)
Wednesday, October 4, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: desire,lips,longing,love and dreams,smile
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Paresh Chakra 15 October 2017

The smile on your lips The crescent moon waist-dipping on the Western-sea In a muse of elixir. A nice haiku on smiling lips. 10++++ for it.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 09 October 2017

The smile on your lips The crescent moon waist-dipping on the Western-sea In a muse of elixir. Great haiku on lips so beautiful supported by the beautiful princess here. 10+++

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Sabita Sahoo 09 October 2017

The smile on your lips The crescent moon waist-dipping on the Western-sea In a muse of elixir. Excellent haiku, so nicely penned. 10+++++

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Anita Aparajita Das 08 October 2017

The smile on your lips The crescent moon waist-dipping on the Western-sea In a muse of elixir. A beautiful haiku, so nicely penned. 10+++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 October 2017

A very nice haiku..wonderful poetic imagination..! !

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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