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Rating: 5.0

Why must good people die?
I know they fly away to the sky
To a peaceful place
But why?
It is so painful
At first you feel like you lost part of your soul
Like part of you has also died
Makes you wonder if you spent enough time with them
Wish you got to know them better
Want them to come back if only for a day

Jorge Rolon 22 June 2010

Wow that was seriously great it really touched me my best friend died in my arms he was a victim of a drive by so i really connect with this

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Yes, when we lose, we morn our loss. It is truly sad and tempts us to bear feelings for none, yet we still open ourselves up to people. It is inevitable that we lose our friends and ourselves.

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That's so beautiful. It's sad and inevitable, but it makes me want to be so close to the ones I love.

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Allemagne Roßmann 11 August 2009

Truth of life's agony...one of the best of yours.....voted 10...

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Jasmine Wayne 21 July 2009

Sad and beautiful poem, just remember it is a path which we all shall travel in time.

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Deborah Cromer 18 July 2009

When people we dearly love pass on and leave us, it is very hard. Your poem touches on what we feel. Read my poem entitled 'Here'. I understand, I do. Deborah Cromer

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A Lifetime Of Fame 09 July 2009

Wow. This is the most beautiful poem. I felt just the same way when my great grandmother past away. A very heartfelt poem.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 27 June 2009

A really beautiful, full of life poem on death. Simple, innocent and spontaneous. Jessica's comment is the essence of this poem. It reflects shininess of your soul, Shiny............10/10. Best Wishes Naseer

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Jessica Caswell 17 May 2009

i like this poem... its very good, its telling you that you need to spend more time with loved ones, and watch what you say because you never know when they will pass away

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Nangula Immanuel 01 May 2009

this is a good poem. simple yet powerful! ! it hurts at first, then you learn to live with it and find strength in the things they left behind. Perhaps it will make more sense if you read on of my poems titled ' you weren't there'. Good poem though! !

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