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As I walk along the deserted beach
I feel the damp sand surronding my feet
I feel the cool relaxing breeze creep up upon me with ease
As I look out at the restless waves my thoughts unwind like restless days
The beach is a very quiet and calming place

Eleanor Bruner 04 May 2021

I love it. Couldn't of written anything better! !

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hello 15 May 2018

Surrounding is spelt wrong

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Anil Kumar 14 April 2011

I like the way you wrote the poem.One thought continuously perceiving the other thoughts aroused.Comparing the continuous flow of thoughts with continuous fluctuations and variations of sea water.Nice poem

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Eyan Desir 17 January 2010

good write well expresss....

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Joseph Poewhit 02 November 2009

Captures the shoreline well.

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Very calm and serene. Inspiring tranquility.

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Allemagne Roßmann 11 August 2009

Solitude and introspection going side by side...do read my Flowers of Love and When i Think about you which has the similar impact.10 voted for you

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true it is a moving and rhythimic place roaring load yet it gives peace we feel one with it...lovely short poem

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M.j. Daniels 29 July 2009

That's a really good poem i like it

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Cat Tiger 24 July 2009

There is a hint of ONOMATOPOEIA in your verse. 'The sand surrounding my feet' begs the lines 'and creeping up through my toes.' Creep, however, doesn't work with breeze and ease. Also 'surrounding' is misspelled. Nice effort though, for a girl of 17. ~Cat

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