Dislocated Heart

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* :) - Poem by Dislocated Heart

She gives me the joy of the world..
The world is different with her by myside..
I see all the beauty, and no pain is inflicted..
She gives nearly everything that I need..

Is it possible that I'm falling so deeply in love with her?
Cuz it seems like I am..

She appears in my mind..
The moment I open my eyes..
and when I close them..
I see the future and what it could hold for us inside.

Babe, If your reading,
Heres the truth..
I'm falling so deep in love with you.
Every waking moment..
theres a thought of you in my mind.
& I smile each time..

My friends ask,
Why am I so happy..
I simply say..
Its this girl of mines..

She got the sweetest voice,
A guy can ever listen to..
Personality.. thats bubbly and cute.
She is beautiful from the inside out..
&I love her.. and I doubt anything will ever change that.


Comments about * :) by Dislocated Heart

  • (5/6/2009 11:48:00 AM)

    You continue to wow me.. every poem i read is more amazing then the last.. keep posting i love your poems. (Report)Reply

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  • (10/6/2008 6:50:00 PM)

    its good that you found love again..
    hope in the end everything works out
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  • (10/3/2008 8:50:00 AM)

    16 was when i first fell in love too....let me tell you something...hold onto this..young love/first loves are the best you will ever have...the youth and freshness cannot always be repeated...i'm happy for you and great poem! ! (Report)Reply

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  • (9/25/2008 12:58:00 PM)

    And all she can do is smile. =) (Report)Reply

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  • (9/24/2008 3:02:00 AM)

    Cordially well penned...made my heart dotingly to this piece.10+++. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 24, 2008



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