Catrina Heart

_____________ - Poem by Catrina Heart

On seven seas, aviation is a delight
For momentum gains and leaf rewards
Painting rainbows, smothering fireflies
Viable only through his fingertips design

His hands take wing like gigantic tiny feathers
Tip toeing on keys and control panels
Unveiling horizon, consolidating days halcyon
Linking bridges, entwined to be one

On 9th cloud by the fire of season owned he sleeps...
handful are days to him who kills time yet millions still...
to the one who sees bright morrows of the ploughing fields

Comments about _____________ by Catrina Heart

  • Indira Renganathan (1/26/2010 1:41:00 AM)

    Though it gives a good feeling the reader is yet to wait for the completed meaning....good aviation poem (Report) Reply

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  • Prince Obed de la Cruz (12/31/2009 3:22:00 AM)

    though it's unfinished... it is good... please tell me ma'am if you've finished it so that i may read more. (Report) Reply

  • (12/22/2009 4:02:00 AM)

    This is a beautiful draft
    I am sure it will be more beautiful
    when its done...
    (Report) Reply

  • (12/19/2009 10:08:00 PM)

    Verses in this write are good but i couldn't get what you meant by unfinished and your title too. Its out of my reach. (Report) Reply

  • (12/19/2009 3:22:00 PM)

    Such enigmatic words. (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh T A (12/19/2009 2:07:00 PM)

    Artistic acumen quite minute in skill fascinates fans! (Report) Reply

  • (12/19/2009 1:24:00 PM)

    beautifully finished words so lovely 10 (Report) Reply

  • Is It Poetry (12/19/2009 1:09:00 PM)

    it is true..
    a farmers day..
    is never through..
    unplanned field...iip
    (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 19, 2009

Poem Edited: Wednesday, February 3, 2010

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