_____________ Poem by Catrina Heart

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Rating: 5.0


On seven seas, aviation is a delight
For momentum gains and leaf rewards
Painting rainbows, smothering fireflies
Viable only through his fingertips design

His hands take wing like gigantic tiny feathers
Tip toeing on keys and control panels
Unveiling horizon, consolidating days halcyon
Linking bridges, entwined to be one

On 9th cloud by the fire of season owned he sleeps...
handful are days to him who kills time yet millions still...
to the one who sees bright morrows of the ploughing fields

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
James Mclain 19 December 2009

it is true.. a farmers day.. is never through.. one.. unplanned field...iip

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Carol Gall 19 December 2009

beautifully finished words so lovely 10

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Ramesh T A 19 December 2009

Artistic acumen quite minute in skill fascinates fans!

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Indira Renganathan 26 January 2010

Though it gives a good feeling the reader is yet to wait for the completed meaning....good aviation poem

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 31 December 2009

though it's unfinished... it is good... please tell me ma'am if you've finished it so that i may read more.

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Eyan Desir 22 December 2009

This is a beautiful draft I am sure it will be more beautiful when its done...

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Kranthi Pothineni 19 December 2009

Verses in this write are good but i couldn't get what you meant by unfinished and your title too. Its out of my reach.

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Patti Masterman 19 December 2009

Such enigmatic words.

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