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[01] Eating Moon

Rating: 4.2

I've climbed up a betel-nut tree
Plucked and eaten up
a purplish-blue moon last night...


Before going in bed
I felt a soft tablet into my gullet
dissolving down...

I've truly consumed you
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Ershad Mazumder 26 August 2008

Excellant job dear musaddek.

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Gargi Saha 18 October 2008

Extraordinary imagination.

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Kesav Easwaran 29 September 2008

good imagery, Ashraf...thanks for sharing...

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Tsira Goge 25 September 2008

Now I know why the moon so unexpectedly has disappeared last night . 10.... Thenks for sharing, Ashraful... Tsira

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Not a member No 3 12 September 2008

Mysterious on first read, clever on the second... nice work ... brief but packed with meaning and visual material...

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Anna jonson 26 August 2008

good and funny.. i like it very much

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