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[02] Sky Of Kites

Rating: 5.0

Who wakes up from the graveyard
After two decades like Rip Van Winkle?
Soft memory? Frankenstein desire?

Gorilla wishes dispersed
On the dream map.

Cutting off the naval string of illusion
Who wakes up?
Lunatic art-sickness? Fruitless passion?

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rago rago 05 July 2009

well penned thught provoking poem................

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Miriam Maia Padua 27 April 2009

very meaningful... thoughts' provoking questions ...very significant piece.. 10++

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Alison Cassidy 14 September 2008

This is a fascinating poem that uses words sparsely but very effectively. Your sky of kites comes from a place of truth and takes off the mask of illusion. Splendid write. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Antonio Liao 25 August 2008

what a nice sublime...cutting off naval string of illusion...a reality that we are just a subjourner on earth.... we are free... free, a 10 point

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