Ashraful Musaddeq

Rookie - 86 Points (Aug 16 1958 / Bangladesh)

[02] Within Dream - Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

Opening door I'll go to mango-garden
And pick-up babyhood
When the morn yarns and brushes teeth
On the stem of neem tree.

Eating green mango I'll fly with kite
When summer-noon baths into river.

Taking leave-card from class-monitor
I'll enter into childhood
And never fall back again.



Poem 19
Book 'Firefly Can't Make a Day' February 2008
Copyright Writer
Rhythm Publishers, Dhaka, Bangladesh
ISBN 984-8319-63-8


Comments about [02] Within Dream by Ashraful Musaddeq

  • (8/24/2009 1:42:00 PM)


    Retrospective!
    In time-machine travel in back-gear to touch and savor childhood.
    Ten
    dr. sakti
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  • (6/28/2009 5:40:00 AM)


    a true dream either in the dream or in real life we never get into.......... (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/26/2009 7:04:00 AM)


    Taking leave-card from class-monitor
    I’ll enter into childhood
    And never fall back again.... good rememebrence of childhood... well nit words with gold remiinscenes.......10

    as 'Child' i was so notorious... omment if u like
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  • Sherif Monem (5/25/2009 12:48:00 PM)


    Nice poem of childhood. (Report) Reply

  • (5/24/2009 7:58:00 AM)


    Brings up vibrant images of childhood days! I had heard many stories from my
    father about the mango, jackfruit and guava gardens of Bangladesh; he use to miss them all - in the congested city of Calcutta! 10++
    -Raj Nandy
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  • (5/18/2009 5:43:00 PM)


    this is a sweet poem.
    once again i love your play on words and how you connect simple ideas with bigger meanings.
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  • (5/15/2009 6:39:00 AM)


    I really enjoyed reading this poem, its nice to look back.10 * Stephanie* (Report) Reply

  • (4/26/2009 6:39:00 PM)


    hmn...childhood...i dream of it oftentimes...and each one of us has this reminiscence...nice writings...thank you for commenting on my page...Read more blogs about me at http: //greca.webs.com. My pleasure to be your friend, dear Ashraful... (Report) Reply

  • (9/25/2008 4:48:00 PM)


    nostalgic memories of childhood well done (Report) Reply

  • Sarwar Chowdhury (9/7/2008 2:30:00 PM)


    Fine imagery crafted with fine words............10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 4, 2008

Poem Edited: Sunday, August 5, 2012


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