[03] House Lizards Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

[03] House Lizards

Rating: 4.8


Two house lizards— hugging
Under florescent lamp
Making love— love stops at lust

Lust is the last station— get down
East-west-north-south beckoning
Let's move— but where is home

Homeless soul— run and run
Floating imagination poetic cool
Summer follows— to blaze

Like house lizards— confined
Within love-lust boundary
Fortune burns life effectively



Poem 08
Book 'Affluent Love- The Silent Killer' February 2012
Copyright Writer
Adarsha Publishers, Dhaka, Bangladesh
ISBN 978-984-8875-33-9

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 20 June 2009

great imagination out of observation...good poet you are Ashraf...thanks...10

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Tsira Goge 19 June 2009

Very beautiful and deep fable, you are very clever man, Ashraful..10... Sincerely, Tsira

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Ejaz Khan 19 June 2009

It's seldom one comes across a poet, who can masterly connect love making lizatds to complicated human living, excellent and fluent.10+++

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Howard Kern 19 June 2009

In my eyes you have just become DR.hakiu! . in the Traditional form connecting things of the Earth to man and under GOD. Very well expressed. I know you probly don't keep a score as I do not, but I give this one a 10+++ have a blessed day

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Saadat Tahir 19 June 2009

great content and well penned...deeply refelctive well done cheers

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premji premji 25 June 2009

i see two broken tails dancing...... ah! poetry......... please read the poems from no 132 to 140 in my poetry collection. these poems are written by and written on my little sister Silssa, who died of cancer. these are the poems she wrote to fight against cancer. please read and comment.

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very well expressed lines....10

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This is surely a deep and meaningful poem. Being an observer as you are, your imagination has taken us to your profound conclusion. Thank you Ashraful! 10 Karin Anderson

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Raj Arumugam 22 June 2009

powerful and evocative imagery and so well-expressed

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Shashendra Amalshan 20 June 2009

you know sir! ! every one who visit u must be thinking..'oh gosh! ! i wish i can write like this'.. i don't know, i wish i can write such sweet ones..... great one indeed A++ regards shan

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