1+1=1 Poem by Sathya Narayana


Rating: 5.0

I dispute his permutation!
At least twice a day; him, I curse
and me; he often pinches and wrenches!
Well! I understand his compulsions
ans He too does sympathize my follies;
again, we laugh off our excesses.

Runs thus our rollercoaster romance.
Yet, lingers a feeling of emptiness.

I asked him, 'Why this gulf between us;
aren't we very, very close friends;
with consensus of minds? '
He smiled, 'You understand me. Yes.
But you don't know me in essence! '
I asked, 'Hey! What is the difference?
Both words sound to me in same sense.
When do I know you in wholeness? '

Trickled down HIS words mysterious
'When you become I, and I …..you! ! '

Friday, January 2, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: god,human being,soul

Soulmates, beautiful....10

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Oh My! , I love your poem and it brought to mind a poem I wrote several years ago with the same question of 1+1=1...My poem is called Love's Lament...please read when time allows...10 here for you! Oh My!

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Dr Kamran Haider 04 January 2009

Wow bhayya... Its awesome... Lovely to read... Thanks for sharing, ...

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Chitra - 05 January 2009

discover ourselves in someone else and yet retain our essence a novel write

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Ken E Hall 05 January 2009

Into self poem very original-Rollercoaster romance emptyness, Essence unknown in friendship and crying out for luv as I see it- I'm sure it will prevail luv I mean good write uavaniceday regards

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Kesav Easwaran 04 November 2009

good write...very artfully told...10

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'Trickled down HIS words mysterious “When you become I, and I …..you” ' His [not his] excellent. And lastly that EI = 'I' Great dr. sakti 12.08.09.

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Queeny Gona 28 June 2009

Great friendship of yours! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! though with two bodies only one soul...

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Marieta Maglas 19 June 2009

This poem (my opinion) means that we need to become aware and to acquire knowledge of the part that is missing and take the possession, through knowledge, of whole..For this purpose we must know each other perfectly and we must have a convergent thinking..I'm starting to understand you. great poem...10+++ Thank you for sharing.

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Marilyn Lott 22 April 2009

You describe a deep friendship that builds over a long period of time. Very well thought out and described. A '10! ' Best Wishes, Marilyn

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Sathya Narayana

Sathya Narayana

Nellore, Andhra Pradesh
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