I dispute his permutation!
At least twice a day; him, I curse
and me; he often pinches and wrenches!
Well! I understand his compulsions
ans He too does sympathize my follies;
again, we laugh off our excesses.
Runs thus our rollercoaster romance.
Yet, lingers a feeling of emptiness.
I asked him, 'Why this gulf between us;
aren't we very, very close friends;
with consensus of minds? '
He smiled, 'You understand me. Yes.
But you don't know me in essence! '
I asked, 'Hey! What is the difference?
Both words sound to me in same sense.
When do I know you in wholeness? '
Trickled down HIS words mysterious
'When you become I, and I …..you! ! '
Oh My! , I love your poem and it brought to mind a poem I wrote several years ago with the same question of 1+1=1...My poem is called Love's Lament...please read when time allows...10 here for you! Oh My!
Wow bhayya... Its awesome... Lovely to read... Thanks for sharing, ...
discover ourselves in someone else and yet retain our essence a novel write
Into self poem very original-Rollercoaster romance emptyness, Essence unknown in friendship and crying out for luv as I see it- I'm sure it will prevail luv I mean good write uavaniceday regards
'Trickled down HIS words mysterious “When you become I, and I …..you” ' His [not his] excellent. And lastly that EI = 'I' Great dr. sakti 12.08.09.
Great friendship of yours! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! though with two bodies only one soul...
This poem (my opinion) means that we need to become aware and to acquire knowledge of the part that is missing and take the possession, through knowledge, of whole..For this purpose we must know each other perfectly and we must have a convergent thinking..I'm starting to understand you. great poem...10+++ Thank you for sharing.
You describe a deep friendship that builds over a long period of time. Very well thought out and described. A '10! ' Best Wishes, Marilyn
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Soulmates, beautiful....10