Sathya Narayana

Gold Star - 5,529 Points (12-06-1958 / Nellore, Andhra Pradesh)

1+1=1 - Poem by Sathya Narayana

I dispute his permutation!
At least twice a day; him, I curse
and me; he often pinches and wrenches!
Well! I understand his compulsions
ans He too does sympathize my follies;
again, we laugh off our excesses.

Runs thus our rollercoaster romance.
Yet, lingers a feeling of emptiness.

I asked him, 'Why this gulf between us;
aren't we very, very close friends;
with consensus of minds? '
He smiled, 'You understand me. Yes.
But you don't know me in essence! '
I asked, 'Hey! What is the difference?
Both words sound to me in same sense.
When do I know you in wholeness? '

Trickled down HIS words mysterious
'When you become I, and I …! ! '

Topic(s) of this poem: god, human being, soul

Form: Narrative

Comments about 1+1=1 by Sathya Narayana

  • (11/4/2009 7:49:00 PM)

    good write...very artfully told...10 (Report) Reply

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  • (8/12/2009 1:48:00 PM)

    'Trickled down HIS words mysterious
    “When you become I, and I …” '

    His [not his] excellent.
    And lastly that EI = 'I'
    dr. sakti
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  • Queeny Gona (6/28/2009 12:45:00 AM)

    Great friendship of yours! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! though with two bodies only one soul... (Report) Reply

  • (6/19/2009 12:07:00 PM)

    This poem (my opinion) means that we need to become aware and to acquire knowledge of the part that is missing and take the possession, through knowledge, of whole..For this purpose we must know each other perfectly and we must have a convergent thinking..I'm starting to understand you.
    great poem...10+++
    Thank you for sharing.
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  • Marilyn Lott (4/22/2009 7:20:00 AM)

    You describe a deep friendship that builds over a long period of time. Very well thought out and described. A '10! '

    Best Wishes,
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  • (1/20/2009 1:08:00 AM)

    One plus One is equal to a little Big One, very nice rememberance, like Oneness University. thanks for sharing.10++ (Report) Reply

  • Karen Palero (1/16/2009 12:58:00 AM)

    ..great metaphor...!
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  • (1/11/2009 7:54:00 AM)

    the essence of love is all about this...! ! !

    wow...! ! ! awesome work...

    : D
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  • (1/7/2009 8:57:00 PM)

    How to nibble our presence in this musty pensive way of life, way the World goes...
    Me; he often pinches and wrenches
    Well! I understand his compulsions
    He too does sympathize my follies
    Again, we laugh off our excesses
    Runs thus our rollercoaster romance

    Yet, ...........
    everything passes the really....
    I dispute his permutations
    At least twice a day; him, I curse
    ....we must pent it
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  • (1/6/2009 2:36:00 AM)

    Great work! agree with essence of the idea...10/10 (Report) Reply

  • (1/5/2009 4:22:00 PM)

    this poem is really unique.i like it its special. (Report) Reply

  • Palas Kumar Ray (1/5/2009 12:56:00 PM)

    This is a different kind of work Sathyaji. In fact, you have masterfully done with the conflict.Alas! when I becomes me, Me shifts to the location of I and the gulf remains.Hence,1+1=/=1 and the Mathematics Wins.
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  • (1/5/2009 3:44:00 AM)

    Into self poem very original-Rollercoaster romance emptyness, Essence unknown
    in friendship and crying out for luv as I see it- I'm sure it will prevail luv I mean
    good write uavaniceday
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  • (1/5/2009 12:31:00 AM)

    discover ourselves in someone else and yet retain our essence
    a novel write
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  • (1/4/2009 5:00:00 PM)

    Wow bhayya... Its awesome... Lovely to read... Thanks for sharing, ... (Report) Reply

  • (1/4/2009 4:55:00 PM)

    Oh My! , I love your poem and it brought to mind a poem I wrote several years ago with the same question of 1+1=1...My poem is called Love's Lament...please read when time allows...10 here for you! Oh My! (Report) Reply

  • PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE (1/4/2009 3:01:00 AM)

    Soulmates, beautiful....10 (Report) Reply

  • Kassem Oude (1/3/2009 12:25:00 PM)

    Roll down 107 dices with 107 faces each, then count the probabilites, am not of 'math' but I think an infinity of peole the result would be. So a man can be one with his shadow only even if people share many oulines. (Report) Reply

  • (1/3/2009 9:34:00 AM)

    you and I can become we one entity if we trust enough (Report) Reply

  • (1/3/2009 7:52:00 AM)

    Unique and interesting become one in other person can be attributed probably by encarnation..or in one mind team work..well? (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 2, 2009

Poem Edited: Saturday, September 24, 2016

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