1-A Story Of The Deer's Musk Poem by sarwar chowdhury
1-A Story Of The Deer's Musk
Having smell of the Deer's Musk
The Deer himself become obsessed but
it is truely not an easy task
to identify the source of smell clear-cut.
Ah deer! Oh dear! where that's hidden you think!
The Musk developed in his navel region
but he is running here and there
restless shameless, as mad, off and on,
not having informed the smell brings air.
Madness of love would have not been come out
If he were informed!
It is within him in fact!
O deer
That's why you are a lover of the true incense
The truth within you the Musk- the true essence.
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(It is a similitude, a story of love of 'Know thyself'. Here, the Deer is a symbol of 'being'. And the Musk symbolizes 'Perfect being'.)
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People have understood this deer is rather human. Pungent smell...of mystery. It has to do with something sacred. It is the call of sensuality.
a very good one i may say, il liked these two parts.(of coures i liked it all) .'..Ah deer! Oh dear! ' and 'That's why you are a lover of the true incense The truth within you the Musk- the true essence'.
Sorry for repeating this but, it was very spiritual and i loved it. I acutaly sang it because it felt like a story/song with alot of words with heavy meanings. I rate it, a 10 =)
very good with words n looks like very qualifeied can read ur passion for literature and really nice
Dear Sc, Depicts nicely the search for ones self the inner/soul....... the beauty and fragrance exist in one but to realize it is the venture.... rgrds/salu
Nice spiritual thoughts. Sant Kabirdas wrote the following two lines around 1450; 'Kasthuri Kundali Basai, Mriga doondai vanamaahi Aisi khadi khadi Ram hai, Dunia Dekhai naahi.' It is identical to your writing.
very nice poem, if only we realize the greatness in us we need not go round mad searching for it from somewhere outside
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 10:33:16 PM # 1.0.0
this piece was also very nice keep it up