Amanda Lukas

Rookie (Ft. Lauderdale, FL)

(11) Kissing My Tears Away - Poem by Amanda Lukas

He holds me while I cry
and flashes gentle loving glances
as he looks into teary brown eyes.
He explains them as 'beautiful'
as I try to hide my face
which is now salty and moist
from the droplets trinkling down
my cheeks like rain on a window.
He brings two soft lips to my lashes
to kiss away my tears
and I simply can't help but feel guilty
for being in such a state
that he must kiss a tear away.
Still, he is patient and concerned.
It's almost as if he was placed here
for that very reason.
To be my angel, my love, my friend.
And I am his little lost puppy;
knowing next to nothing
and loving to be loved.


Comments about (11) Kissing My Tears Away by Amanda Lukas

  • Edward Kofi Louis (3/30/2016 1:42:00 AM)

    For being in such a state! And to taste the salt of my tears. Thanks for sharing. (Report)Reply

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  • (1/16/2007 10:25:00 AM)

    Interesting poem...Like how it flowed...nice write.

    I've got some new poems posted if you would like to take a look, I really appreciate your comments.

    Take care,

    Jay
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  • (3/21/2006 7:58:00 AM)

    Very interesting poem... Makes you wonder about why people are placed in your life... (Report)Reply

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  • (3/16/2006 12:22:00 PM)

    Interesting the poem shows about gratitude and the mutual understanding. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 16, 2006

Poem Edited: Thursday, October 11, 2007


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