1961 Poem by Juan Olivarez

1961

Rating: 5.0


In 1961 I asked my dad,
Papi, when will 1961 come back?
He said'Juanito, please don't feel bad,
But 1961 won't ever come back.'

In 1961 I was eight years old.
I didn't know it at the time,
That only twelve more years, I'd hold,
That aging father of mine.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bert Bell 29 October 2010

Beautiful poem, Juan. Very moving words.

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Pranab K Chakraborty 30 October 2010

Beautiful craft of memory and tribute together. Good poem with easy flow. Thank you for your openness. 10++++++ Regards, pranab

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Lynn Glover 04 November 2010

Written, I could tell with much love in your heart, Juan and I know that this poem will always live within you. A very good write.

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Luke Easter 22 December 2010

When I saw the title,1961, I just knew it was about Roger Maris & #61. Oh well...

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Jim Farr 25 July 2011

great message, and it flows very well

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Kim Barney 03 May 2015

Very nice poem about the love you shared with your father. Family ties are one of the most important things in life. My father lived to be 86 but my mother was only 44 when she passed away. I have written poems about both of them but will not advertise the titles here. 1961, however, will appear again. Just turn it upside down, and there it is! Congrats on poem of the day! Well written.

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Brian Stafford 03 May 2015

Congrats, and on getting poem of the day!

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That only twelve more years, I'd hold, That aging father of mine. the impossibility and possibility are very well connected with lots of emotion attached...Appa, I admire and follow what ever you had taught me through Hindu way of living...

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Kelly Kurt 03 May 2015

Lovely and touching poem, Juan.1961 is forever in your heart.

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Smoky Hoss 16 March 2012

This poem is very moving, and filled with the pathos of life. If only we could go back in time... or, perhaps far enough ahead even...

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