3 Painting On Auction Poem by Alf Hutchison

3 Painting On Auction



She gazed on me through pale blue eyes,
Sweet lady in the frame,
Her beauty caught in a flash of time,
Fair damsel without name,

Soft lips of ripe strawberry red,
So vulnerable, so alone,
White skin, pale and flawless,
Fragile as China bone;

Her trussed up golden layered hair,
Coiffured to near perfection;
Jewelry draped about her neck
A priceless pearl collection

Tears I now see in her eye,
This lass I had never met
Her haunting countenance for sure
Is one I’ll nere forget.

The gavel woke me from my trance,
The auctioneer’s voice so bold
“Your priceless painting, Satan,
Is now officially sold.”

Life is like that work of art,
Painted in shades of leaven,
Focusing on the untold riches,
On earth and not in Heaven.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jayram Daya 01 December 2009

A life is a painting. You had time to see it. Precisely said it’s on this earth The painting of words was a great Masterpiece.

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Seema Chowdhury 30 November 2009

this is a wonderful poem. i really liked it. last stanza is the best. thanks for sharing. take care

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Gold Fish 29 November 2009

Poignant simile. The last stanza tells it all ringing far beyond this simple poem. Life is like that work of art, Painted in shades of leaven, Focusing on the untold riches, On earth and not in Heaven. Both beauty and life are fleeting, but the true treasure lies in heaven the eternal destination.

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Marieta Maglas 29 November 2009

wonderful simile Life is like that work of art, Painted in shades of leaven lovely portrait, very well written poem 10

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Ken E Hall 28 November 2009

The last verse sold the poem in this art come beauty poem written with a touch of class..top clas I might add givingthe reader a story too+++++10 regards

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Majida Abdul Latif 07 December 2009

golden words and i sure love the way you put this poem togther it made me touch the words and feel it throught my heart amazing writing please never stop.

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Deependra Kumar Jha 03 December 2009

wonderfully penned lines. nice story embedded. must say I enjoyed it a lot. thanks for sharing. voted 10

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Eyan Desir 02 December 2009

Not a master piece but well written, , ,

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Chitra - 01 December 2009

extremely well rhymed, artistic allegory..! enjoyable write!

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Louis Rams 01 December 2009

ths is a masterpiece. double ten

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