Alf Hutchison

Rookie - 3 Points (8/7/1943 / South Africa)

2 Don'T Blaspheme. - Poem by Alf Hutchison

Written as a wall plaque.

WHEN YOU ENTER THIS DOMAIN,
AND YOU WISH HERE TO REMAIN,
I ASK YOU PLEASE THEN TO REFRAIN
FROM USING MY LORD'S NAME IN VAIN.


Comments about 2 Don'T Blaspheme. by Alf Hutchison

  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/28/2009 7:06:00 PM)

    WHEN YOU ENTER THIS DOMAIN,
    AND YOU WISH HERE TO REMAIN,
    I ASK YOU PLEASE THEN TO REFRAIN
    FROM USING MY LORD'S NAME IN VAIN..so much said inso shortand that too worth for whole life... beauftiful and reflects the presence of noble thoughts..i likeditandadmire it....10

    read mine inch by aninch..not easy..beautiful world
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  • Lee Crowell (11/28/2009 1:05:00 AM)

    nice work Alf
    I like the directness, no holds barred approach
    too many poems are filled with vague imagery, not this one
    Lee
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  • Elbert Matt Loubser (11/24/2009 4:08:00 AM)

    I'll put that plaque on my wall. People do not realise that the Lord's name is holy, they do not know what they do, they do not know how it affects the world around us and the spiritual world. (Report)Reply

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  • Henry Brown (11/22/2009 8:50:00 PM)

    Powerful message for a lost world. This message could be an eye opener to some believers as well (Report)Reply

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  • Almedia Knight-Oliver (11/20/2009 9:05:00 AM)

    Also...perhaps-first and foremost- be placed in the hearts of the believers.10+++ Thanks for sharing! (Report)Reply

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  • Louis RamsLouis Rams (11/17/2009 4:44:00 PM)

    THIS SHOULD BE PUT AT THE CHUCH ENTRANCE.

    EXCELLENT A TEN
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  • Luwi HabteLuwi Habte (11/17/2009 10:31:00 AM)

    these are just words..
    but there i can see some thing is telling..
    so nice piece dear
    luwi
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  • Stephen Stirk (11/17/2009 3:16:00 AM)

    A great, concise piece Alf. Not one word wasted, and yet says it all such a poetic way. A definite 10
    Best
    Steve
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  • Eyan Desir (11/16/2009 3:12:00 PM)

    not what i expected...good write (Report)Reply

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  • Seema Chowdhury (11/16/2009 6:03:00 AM)

    that is such a nice and thoughtful piece.
    thanks for sharing.
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  • Ken E Hall (11/16/2009 4:14:00 AM)

    The lesson is truth well noted AlfThanks for love of fellow man
    regards
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  • Ency BearisEncy Bearis (11/16/2009 12:14:00 AM)

    strong words and profound deliverance....10 (Report)Reply

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  • Obinna Eruchie (11/15/2009 8:57:00 AM)

    Good words for one to heed to. (Report)Reply

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  • Sandra MartyresSandra Martyres (11/15/2009 3:56:00 AM)

    Very well expressed Alf..Thanks (Report)Reply

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  • Joseph Poewhit (11/14/2009 3:10:00 PM)

    Says most very well--- (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 14, 2009

Poem Edited: Sunday, November 15, 2009


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