Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean


(-) 5 (My Love) Just A Preparation - Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

My bleeding tears
become a dewdropp in the verdant lawns of paradise
My festering wounds
transform magically into a sunkissed vista of radiance
My exhausted feet
dance to celebrate the eternal journey with You
My heaving heart
sings a rapturous symphony to welcome You
My weary soul
gets a divine elevation getting merged with Yours

My entire life till now was just a preparation
For a cosmic union with You


Comments about (-) 5 (My Love) Just A Preparation by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

  • (4/2/2008 3:32:00 AM)


    ..............................leading to the ultimate! (Report) Reply

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  • (9/1/2007 11:41:00 AM)


    this is a beautiful poem, TO... I like the way you have expressed this feeling of the whole life culminating into this just one experience...

    Asma...
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  • (8/8/2007 9:36:00 AM)


    This one's just fab....you get better with every poem! ! (Report) Reply

  • (7/19/2007 12:15:00 AM)


    Beautiful work, ah amore tis grand...
    Wonderful penning T.O.
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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (7/19/2007 12:02:00 AM)


    Gonna' haf' ta' change yir name, lass...from Tranquil Ocean to Vibrant Riptide! lol!
    The imagery here commands like a tidal wave, indeed...Just was passing through, & thought i'd visit a friend for a moment (that be you) ...
    Anyway...(- 5) LOVE is a + 10!


    ~ ~ ~
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  • (7/18/2007 11:56:00 PM)


    Nicely balanced poem which celebrates the divinity of souls conjunction. Pity PH continues to add an extra 'p' to 'drop' isn't it. Rgds, Ivan (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 18, 2007

Poem Edited: Tuesday, March 22, 2011


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