Melvina Germain

Gold Star - 25,246 Points (Sydney, Nova Scotia)

(580) Nestled Upon The Shore (Fantasy Poem) - Poem by Melvina Germain

Oh beauty, beauty, what do you seek?
Adrift you come to take a peak.
Tis June the month you do embark,
I long to see your body stark.

Fair mermaid of the golden sea,
why do you bless the likes of me.
Mine eyes are full of radiant pleasure.
What say you your body measure

Luminous eyes seek a miracle,
lying still on earths great circle.
I beg of you fair mermaid.
Feast your eyes on the likes of me.

Your tail of iridescent treasure,
glistens like glitter from the jeweled sky.
Fair mermaid please don’t pass me by.
A paradox is your faithful dominion

You can’t be who you seem to be.
Nestled upon the shore.
Feast your eyes on the likes of me.
I’ll rest here with you for evermore.

Written: February 22/2007


Comments about (580) Nestled Upon The Shore (Fantasy Poem) by Melvina Germain

  • Bri Edwards (6/1/2016 9:56:00 PM)

    I think Disney was making a film nearby.

    Let's see another.....poem, if not mermaid!

    :)
    Bri
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  • (4/19/2007 8:57:00 PM)

    Wow Melvina you took me to that Shore and it was beautiful! Your imagery was amazing...Excellent fantasy on a cold snowy day! ((Smile))
    Keep up the Amazing work! ! ! !
    =Shell=
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  • (3/7/2007 10:29:00 PM)

    This is beautiful Melvina...I can clearly picture this through your writing...wonderful!
    All the best, Diane
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  • (3/5/2007 8:17:00 AM)

    Ah, the siren call of fantasy, myth and legend, this poem calls to me! I still wish these things were true. Melvina, this is lovely, well done! Esther : ] (Report)Reply

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  • (2/24/2007 12:43:00 PM)

    Absolutely beautiful poem Melvina! ! I can picture this gentle soul upon a shore in the Maritimes!
    Hugs,
    Dee
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  • (2/24/2007 12:27:00 PM)

    Melvina, I loved the imagery on this fantasy. Beautiful write. A worthy 10. Mermaids the sirens of the sea. Thanks for sharing it.
    David
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, February 24, 2007

Poem Edited: Saturday, January 22, 2011


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