Her jocand company was he…. Going back in a vacant mood…..For good! Knowing sweet promises broken ….. Faithful love no more…. Burnt core! ........Said- no more… Knoweth that beauteous morning….No quetch from my side…. Sure, I can’t let my love spotted impure…Wishes mine not immix…. I am a phoenix……!
Her serene eyes tearful…. Never thought…….Would be painful so….Said- don’t go….Dear! do not let me...! She is in sahara desert alone ah….. Said- I know I did wrong……Even so you are my song…. whimsically I stood against my conscience…. Yes, knoweth that beauteous morning….Above all….You are loved by me……Come back my Love!
A forlorn …….Period of turbulence send out lesson- Treasure of love gone…..So mourn………Forlorn!
The poet said-
Emblem she emblem he emblems the universes are
Things all blessed by, remember, so put out the fire.
Nothing but love reflect, o friends, get your point higher.
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Rich! ! in content..in expression and in the message... nicely done!
Liked the structure to this Sarwar my friend....solid craftsmanship....the emotion pounds into the heart with this well composed piece.....great show of your talent Sir 10++
attractive poem title Sarwar...compelling to read...inside love soaked lines...emotion rich...thanks...10
An innovative style complements love that flows out of each syllable of this poem.
Jilt in love is often bear gloss and glitter in metaphysical plane like Radha and Krishna! Poet has concluded that way. Ten gladly and cograts for being in QL of PH dr. sakti
hey i m reading this for the second time.. loved this one.. you can write great love stories.. these things are filled with emotions..... i mean i did comment on this one before... loved it again! ! !
wow. very creative. i love your wording. a very amazing piece of work. I LOVE IT! ! ! ! 10+
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
An emotion filled poem, when words become a sigh, well written Sarwar 10 Lynda xx