911, Was Meant To Stun! Poem by Michael Gale

911, Was Meant To Stun!

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Planes of flame and smoke, exploded to the
side of twin towers, one frightful fateful day...
The shock of horror on observers faces,
filled TV networks, as screens did so, tape
and play!

911, will live on in every nations man...
Because the act was so terrible, it lasts on
every persons memory, as they remember, as
only they can!

Friends and families passed, as well as
police and firemen, The Pentagon was next,
As towers did so fall and crumble, with
smoke and ashes seen, far from East to West...
This is man's final, moral and Godly test!

As man reaches out, to help each other, with
his very, very best!


Michael Jeffrey Gale

Copyright ©2006 Michael Jeffrey Gale

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Tanguay 08 February 2006

Mike: I believe I never heard it described so good

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Theresa Rayman 26 March 2006

Wonderful imagery and description, Michael. This was an event that changed each one of us. We all 'woke up' in one way or another I think. Bravo! Blessings- TGR (Theresa)

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Patricia Gale 20 April 2006

A wonderful write, a true sense of awakening to us all. Well Done Michael Patricia Gale

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AND WHAT A DAY THAT WILL FOREVERMORE BE...I LIVE 'BOUT 20 MIN. FROM GROUND ZERO IN THE COUNTY OF WESTCHESTER...I WITNESSED THE 2ND AIRCRAFT ENTER THESOUTH TOWER LIVE ON TV...WAS LIKE A SCI-FI OF EPIC MEASURE...YOU CAPTURE THIS SORROWED DAY VERY WELL MIKE...NICE WRITE...SOMETIME IF INTERESTED I WILL SHARE STORIES OF THAT DAY THAT HAVE PROMPTED PEOPLE TO ASK ME...WHY NOT WRITE A BOOK...MY RESPONSE SO FAR IS ALWAYS THE SAME...''.IT'S STILL NOT TIME ENOUGH'' RESPECT HAS TO SUPRCEDE GLORY AT ANY COST, , , , , FRANK

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J. Bascomb Smith 15 June 2006

Bravo. I still remember that day. Anyways, I give you a ten. Keep it up. God bless, Joey S

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Shashendra Amalshan 16 May 2009

Very interesting poem indeed...realy did enjoyed it..well narrated inn poetic expressions..very visual..feels like a secen from a movie...10+++

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Bob Blackwell 15 January 2009

I remember the day well, it was quite frightening to see what human beings can do to each other. All those lives lost, for what? As a species we still try to solve our problems in such violent ways, and so the killing continues, even to this day. Bob

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Dr Rajesh Kumar Vaid 06 December 2008

Oh, such a horrific act of dim-headed murderers, and they are doing it again and again.

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Bonnie Collins 12 November 2008

A fine tribute to when america stood still for a day, stood still and watche in amaze as to what happend to our country... I am a new yorker, and it hit my heart very personal as I felt like someone invaded our own back yard.... Many poeple were killed and all for what? ? Prayers all go out to all familes to where affected that dismal day...... Bonnie

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Cecil Hickman 05 August 2007

a very well written poetic piece about a horrific act, which will be retained in so many archives and memories forever, , , vy very well done, , , blessings...Cecil

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Michael Gale

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