A Betrayed Tree Poem by kite remedy

A Betrayed Tree

Rating: 3.0


Dance,
these boughs and branches
sway,
revelry at the midday,
sun,
hates me and hides behind
the rain
love I have, I grow is in vain
but my leaves,
my bark are still strong enough to live
so me dance,
a heartbreak to fight against
dance,
my bending boughs and branches,
dance,
on my own roots, I can still stand..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ency Bearis 14 January 2009

nice flow..great write...

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Loved the flow.. beautiful!

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 13 January 2009

heartbreak and the pain...poor tree thats when it couldn't stand up on its own roots... loved the comparison u made... : D

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I love the ending.. Great write...

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Joseph Poewhit 12 January 2009

Life is a dance, just have to decide which steps

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Michelle Melody 14 January 2009

Absolutely beautiful 10

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 14 January 2009

simple and nice...read my poem 'a never ending story- exploitation'

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Celine Socrates 14 January 2009

beautiful poem. quite deceptively simple.

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Raj Nandy 14 January 2009

The poem breathes positive feelings and emotions! This is an important aspect of life! Never to feel lost in this arena of life! Your poem does convey a good message! 10! -Raj Nandy

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Seema Aarella 14 January 2009

very poignant write...of emotion!

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