Dance,
these boughs and branches
sway,
revelry at the midday,
sun,
hates me and hides behind
the rain
love I have, I grow is in vain
but my leaves,
my bark are still strong enough to live
so me dance,
a heartbreak to fight against
dance,
my bending boughs and branches,
dance,
on my own roots, I can still stand..
heartbreak and the pain...poor tree thats when it couldn't stand up on its own roots... loved the comparison u made... : D
I love the ending.. Great write...
simple and nice...read my poem 'a never ending story- exploitation'
The poem breathes positive feelings and emotions! This is an important aspect of life! Never to feel lost in this arena of life! Your poem does convey a good message! 10! -Raj Nandy
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
nice flow..great write...